RedCollarBlackCollar said:
>Left arm's way too short
>Face is a single shape; needs some more curves on it to look more natural, and less pointed chin
>>Line art's really faded in certain areas

I'd recommend sticking to just line art for now, as that way we can give some better feedback for lines that are easier to see. Shading aint too bad, but it makes it tougher to see certain parts of it.
Looking at it, yeah that left arm is hobbit size. :/ Damn it.