someguy231 said:
My fellow Hyp-Hubians, this art of mine I placed here has been flagged: https://someguy231.deviantart.com/art/Kaelin-Hypno-Hip-Sway-721463307

BUT, I'm not here to complain. What can I do to improve on it when it gets deleted off this site?
I'd go for a relatively obvious and general one, I hope it helps : do a lot of drawing from real life, and observation of said real life.
Doing it genuenly helps figuring out how things works (volume/perspective and so on). I think it is always a good thing to do when trying to improve the overalll quality of your art. :)