Poem help
Hey! I was just coming up with a poetic induction, but so far I only have one verse. Anyone want to help?

"My magic stare can hypnotize,
Swirl patterns within your eyes,
And simplify your mind to my desires."

Any ideas for more verses?
Kaaslave23 said:
Hey! I was just coming up with a poetic induction, but so far I only have one verse. Anyone want to help?

"My magic stare can hypnotize,
Swirl patterns within your eyes,
And simplify your mind to my desires."

Any ideas for more verses?
So I can sell you to my buyers.
Won't you let your mind drift deep,
Sinking slowly as I will,
Just close your eyes and go to sleep.
Friye said:
Won't you let your mind drift deep,
Sinking slowly as I will,
Just close your eyes and go to sleep.
I like it!

Though I’m thinking at the end of the induction the victim will be staring wide-eyed at the hypnotist waiting for a command.
My magic stare can hypnotize,
Swirling patterns within your eyes,
Simplifying your mind to my desires.

Go ahead now, take a chance,
Falling deeper into trance,
And end the doubts of any and all deniers

My magic stare is full of power,
growing stronger every hour,
It's stronger than your will could ever be

Why bother trying to resist?
Surrender now, I must insist.
It's better having will that isn't free

My magic stare is what shall keep
Your mind within a state of sleep,
Reality is turning into dream.

My words are designed to enthral,
No need to question them at all.
Your mind is unravelling at the seam.

My magic stare makes you obey,
Following my orders come what may.
Susceptible to all of my demands

Though it may sound quite cliche,
You will do whatever I say,
Now stare for me and wait for your commands
HollyDolly said:
My magic stare can hypnotize,
Swirling patterns within your eyes,
Simplifying your mind to my desires.

Go ahead now, take a chance,
Falling deeper into trance,
And end the doubts of any and all deniers

My magic stare is full of power,
growing stronger every hour,
It's stronger than your will could ever be

Why bother trying to resist?
Surrender now, I must insist.
It's better having will that isn't free

My magic stare is what shall keep
Your mind within a state of sleep,
Reality is turning into dream.

My words are designed to enthral,
No need to question them at all.
Your mind is unravelling at the seam.

My magic stare makes you obey,
Following my orders come what may.
Susceptible to all of my demands

Though it may sound quite cliche,
You will do whatever I say,
Now stare for me and wait for your commands
That's great!