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Kansattica
>> #18091
Posted on 2014-05-18 10:45:10
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No comments yet? You mean I gotta read this thing to see if it's any good? You monsters.

Spirals
>> #18185
Posted on 2014-05-19 04:25:37
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A few minor spelling mistakes, not nearly the worst I've seen. It's been a while since I saw something styled like this, having the text run alongside multiple images, rather than the standard caption added to the side or below (not that there's anything wrong with that).

Zko
>> #18187
Posted on 2014-05-19 04:37:31
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Spirals said:
A few minor spelling mistakes, not nearly the worst I've seen. It's been a while since I saw something styled like this, having the text run alongside multiple images, rather than the standard caption added to the side or below (not that there's anything wrong with that).


this is a much better way of doing it imo, the reader can glance at the image as the story advances to help get a more immersive narrative going. Bummer that it takes more effort.

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