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>> #21380
Posted on 2014-06-24 12:47:39
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This is my first post here, so bear with me. I tagged it as best as I could. :P If there's anything I should know about, feel free to let me know!
Grim
>> #21381
Posted on 2014-06-24 13:43:33
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something more representing MC would be good - maybe some confusion swirls, sparkles, a thoughtbubble with her face showing outrage, text describing the situation, or another character - personally, looking at this, I see n reason to assume the subject is hypnotized, and not just a happy cross-eyed girl. What she appears to be doing is not outside what a non-hypnotized person would do, and other then shrunken irises and being cross-eyed, which themselves can happen normally, there are no MC 'tells'
Kansattica
>> #21385
Posted on 2014-06-24 19:49:31
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Grim said:
something more representing MC would be good - maybe some confusion swirls, sparkles, a thoughtbubble with her face showing outrage, text describing the situation, or another character - personally, looking at this, I see n reason to assume the subject is hypnotized, and not just a happy cross-eyed girl. What she appears to be doing is not outside what a non-hypnotized person would do, and other then shrunken irises and being cross-eyed, which themselves can happen normally, there are no MC 'tells'


This is a good start- I know some people- like me- tend to focus on the eyes. She is cute, though. I wanna see what's going on here. Does she have a name? Will we see more of her?
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