"Somehow, in the the tank each time she breathed the water it made her so.." is definitely missing some kind of punctuation. Here's my favorite interpretation: "Somehow, in the the tank, each time she breathed the water, it made her so.." (In this case "so" is an emphasizing word in the sense of "I love her so".)
I'm not selling them, and mostly just make things for fun. So if that's an issue, make a note of my name and pass over it <3
That's kind of a lousy attitude to have, though. People don't point out mistakes to be mean, they point them out so you can learn and do better next time. We don't just want people to keep making more content; we want them to improve while making more content. You should take all criticisms to heart. Just do a little proofreading next time.
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>> #23018
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No grammar errors that i can spot
4th line from bottom: "It know everything."
>> #23023
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And yea xD I think I have a few with some errors that I noticed after the fact. So long as the manips are enjoyed though <3
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4th line from bottom: "It know everything."
1st line at the top "Those thought ran through her head."
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No grammar errors that i can spot
3 cases of 'breath' where it ought to be 'breathe'.
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But I think they get the point and just don't care. lol#tl
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"Stuggle"
But I think they get the point and just don't care. lol#tl
I totally don't care :D
Nor will I care in future things xD
I'm not selling them, and mostly just make things for fun. So if that's an issue, make a note of my name and pass over it <3
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"Somehow, in the the tank, each time she breathed the water, it made her so.."
(In this case "so" is an emphasizing word in the sense of "I love her so".)
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I totally don't care :D
Nor will I care in future things xD
I'm not selling them, and mostly just make things for fun. So if that's an issue, make a note of my name and pass over it <3
That's kind of a lousy attitude to have, though. People don't point out mistakes to be mean, they point them out so you can learn and do better next time. We don't just want people to keep making more content; we want them to improve while making more content. You should take all criticisms to heart. Just do a little proofreading next time.