bleach blonde_hair blue_eyes breasts caption cleavage femdom huge_breasts hypnotic_breasts large_breasts manip necklace orange_hair rangiku_matsumoto text thespoon_(manipper) topless

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HypnoHammer
>> #25123
Posted on 2014-08-12 22:47:34
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nice.

Morgoth
>> #25126
Posted on 2014-08-12 23:10:55
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yay, bleach

EoD
>> #25180
Posted on 2014-08-13 11:40:01
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...Wow that is a REALLY bad edit if the guy couldn't preserve her entire necklace. That...isn't exactly something you can handwave.

TheKinkyFinn
>> #25181
Posted on 2014-08-13 12:00:04
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EoD said:
...Wow that is a REALLY bad edit if the guy couldn't preserve her entire necklace. That...isn't exactly something you can handwave.


That's what bothers you? Dear god, I didn't even notice until I read the text, I was too busy facepalming over the horrible upscaling and clashing redraw lines...

TheSpoon
>> #25187
Posted on 2014-08-13 12:50:55
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EoD said:
...Wow that is a REALLY bad edit if the guy couldn't preserve her entire necklace. That...isn't exactly something you can handwave.


The original photo actually doesn't contain that half of her necklace. It's blocked by the collar of her shirt. I tried to improvise.

TheKinkyFinn said:
That's what bothers you? Dear god, I didn't even notice until I read the text, I was too busy facepalming over the horrible upscaling and clashing redraw lines...


I was waiting for someone to point that out. Yes, the entirety of this image is poorly edited. It's also my first edit/post. I was mainly trying to see what the standards for manip art were. That isn't to say it's purposefully bad, I just didn't think it was bad enough not to post. In the future, I'm probably going to stick to adding text and not applying major editing to the actual image.


TakyonH
>> #25188
Posted on 2014-08-13 13:09:43
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I wasn't gonna say anything but if you're saying it's not good too then LOL holy shit that neck/collarbone/trap ensemble is impressively fucked. Also if you are gonna work with shitty upscaled original pics do a mask with your lines (or just magic wand them fuck) and do a Gaussian blur of 1 or 2 pixels to match the original. Even if you're just in paint.net or something it takes like 2 seconds and makes the editing less obvious.

Cradily
>> #25191
Posted on 2014-08-13 14:03:33
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TheSpoon said:
The original photo actually doesn't contain that half of her necklace. It's blocked by the collar of her shirt. I tried to improvise.

I was waiting for someone to point that out. Yes, the entirety of this image is poorly edited. It's also my first edit/post. I was mainly trying to see what the standards for manip art were. That isn't to say it's purposefully bad, I just didn't think it was bad enough not to post. In the future, I'm probably going to stick to adding text and not applying major editing to the actual image.




I've manipped like ~50 images before my first post on here, so I give you props for uploading the first one you did. Honestly, major editing is a pain in the neck. I think you may have been a bit too ambitious for a first time edit xD I can tell you tried somewhat, there was at least an attempt to shade some parts in. The color of the outlines were sort of out of place though, and you could have tried to make them smoother. The flat color may also be a tad strange, you may have been better if you copy/pasted some parts of the skin in the upscaled image instead.

Note I don't watch bleach and have no idea how the original is supposed to look.

HypnoHammer
>> #25197
Posted on 2014-08-13 16:00:12
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TheSpoon said:
The original photo actually doesn't contain that half of her necklace. It's blocked by the collar of her shirt. I tried to improvise.

I was waiting for someone to point that out. Yes, the entirety of this image is poorly edited. It's also my first edit/post. I was mainly trying to see what the standards for manip art were. That isn't to say it's purposefully bad, I just didn't think it was bad enough not to post. In the future, I'm probably going to stick to adding text and not applying major editing to the actual image.




I think you did great for your first attempt

mixt
>> #25390
Posted on 2014-08-14 20:23:47
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Leaving out the editing (as that has been nicely covered) I feel like you could do a better job explaining the half vanishing clothing. Maybe an implication that the clothes are an illusion and by being half tranced he only partially saw it? Bringing it up only to say to ignore it, while better than not bringing it up, is still very ham-handed.

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