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triple: oh what a choice
A, definitely. There's things going on here, and it'd be good to know them going forward.
Hello, everyone! You're probably wondering why I suddenly stopped posting. Basically, depression hit me hard and left me very worn out for a while. Then, the idea to make this came to me. An RPG-based Interactive story in manips.

It works like this: Each week, a new part of the story will be posted. Everyone will vote on what response our character will make during the week. For this week, you will choose between response A, B, and C. The result of the response will be posted here. I will update this comment when all of the votes for the responses have been tallied. I'll handle what your actions do to you and do my best to keep things interesting.

Since we've just started this, would you like to decide what our character looks like? If so, leave a description. I hope you enjoy the story as it unfolds. This is only going to be uploaded here. leave your votes, descriptions, and comments below. I'll be reading all of them.

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You: So, you have to answer honestly?

?: Yes, I do. You may ask me anything.

You: Okay. Who are you?

Melanine: My queen calls me "Slave #42"; however, you may call me "Melanine". I'm your designated servant for now.

You: So, where am I? What am I doing here?

Melanine: You're in the trial house. You tried to escape our queen a few days ago during resting hours. The council wanted to have you put through another brainwashing session because of your resistant nature; but, our queen decided to put you though the Trials of Lust instead to see if you truly want your freedom.

You: Trials of Lust?

Melanine: The Trials of Lust is a true test of willpower and chastity. You have to make it to the queen's living quarters without going under the spell of one of the many creatures in her forest. They're very provocative and can put you into a trance if you're not careful.

You: So, what happens if I fail?

Melanine: You'll be put through a rigorous brainwashing session like the others.

You: Oh. Right. What happens if I make it to where she lives?

Melanine: You have to make it through one last test in front of her council. Sadly, No one's ever made it past that point.

You: I wonder why.....

Melanine: Her and the council are very persuasive.

You: When do I go through the trials?

Melanine: Today. I'm supposed to go to the hostess when you're done with me.

You: What do you mean by that?

Melanine: Normally, people who go through the trials have sex with their designated servant before they go about to go through the trials.

You: Well, I'll have to decline the sex. Can't let my lust run loose. Tell the hostess I'm ready, Melanine.

Melanine: Okay then. I'll let her know you're ready.
At the risk of sounding boring... my natural, first reaction would be to ask questions.

….and then jump right into the sex. I mean, come on. Sexy neko who is obviously hypnotized in some way.
B. I always love loving dom&subs
HypnoticAura said:
At the risk of sounding boring... my natural, first reaction would be to ask questions.

….and then jump right into the sex. I mean, come on. Sexy neko who is obviously hypnotized in some way.
So, A or B?
A: Asking questions. I mean, where am I? What happened? Why am I here? Who are you? What does your Queen wants with me?

Then again, I have been gifted with a functional surviving instinct. :P
Oh, and I know what it's like to suffer from depression. Take care of yourself hwd171, okay? :)
ElisaSky said:
Oh, and I know what it's like to suffer from depression. Take care of yourself hwd171, okay? :)
Okay. I will. :)
CCCM89 said:
so...where's the MC?
If you are seriously asking that read the text harder.
A, combined with a bit of B (in the form of questions about her) assuming the answers indicate that what's going on is benign.
cdyoung said:
If you are seriously asking that read the text harder.
slight mention of the catgirl seeming "distant" but that's not much to go on. she could just be distracted, or comtemplating why her queen told her to sit half naked in bed with [insert name here] for when they wake up.
It's not explicitly mind control or hypnosis, and for all we know, she'd just distracted by something else.
CCCM89 said:
slight mention of the catgirl seeming "distant" but that's not much to go on. she could just be distracted, or comtemplating why her queen told her to sit half naked in bed with [insert name here] for when they wake up.
It's not explicitly mind control or hypnosis, and for all we know, she'd just distracted by something else.
I didn't want to give away what was going on with her just yet. I needed to be as subtle as I could. Everything will be explained when the time comes.
hwd171 said:
So, A or B?
Uhhhhhh... A. I'll go with A.
HypnoticAura said:
Uhhhhhh... A. I'll go with A.
Noted.
A.
Because jumping right into sex without knowing could lead the reader into becoming the next mind controlled slave
Cool idea! I think I'm also going with the A crowd, though asking her name would also be right up there.
Onto the A bandwagon I go!

Also, considering the character is still gender-neutral, might I perchance nominate their gender be female? I'd even go so far as to vote female neko much like the one in bed with them, perhaps even former male transformed female neko, but the last desire I have is to ruin the story for anyone else, so I simply keep this a suggestion/nomination until further input from others is given.
abithig said:
Onto the A bandwagon I go!

Also, considering the character is still gender-neutral, might I perchance nominate their gender be female? I'd even go so far as to vote female neko much like the one in bed with them
Sounds like a good idea.
A. with questions leading towards B once the Who What When Where Why is done.
I'm going to go with A... And I would also nominante our character to be female if that's possible and not story destroying.
A, B, C, in that order. I'm boring today, sorry. :(
Looks like I'm not the only one that would ask her some questions first
Sothe102 said:
I'm going to go with A... And I would also nominante our character to be female if that's possible and not story destroying.
It's very possible.

BritBoyToy said:
Looks like I'm not the only one that would ask her some questions first
You most certainly aren't.
I like the irony that despite this being a porn site, everyone chose A. Lol

Course the gamer in me is screaming A as well so let's o with A.
A.

And it'd be cool if it was a male turned f neko, I'm always a sucker for tf/corruption.

Though if you have something else planned, that's fine. Looking forward to the next edition!
It's a trap. I choice D run for the hiiiills! Or you know ask questions, A.
We all play way too many video games so of course we're going to choose A the first time. It's on the second and third play through that you choose B or C.
Unpopular as it seems to be, my choice would be B. Knowing who you're talking to is a good way to figure out what to ask...not to mention getting them to possibly open up more.
I know A is a good option but I'm gonna be the rebel and vote C
"A" could lead to the result of B (partially) in the process (like she explain that she is an hypnoslave etc so you can't really get to know her better anyway)
So A, and trying to be the most accurate possible.

Also, il live the concept^^
Is this houtengeki's drawing, by the way?

Because it sure as hell looks like houtengeki's art style to me.
I'm saying C to just screw with people.

Normally I'd pick A, but come on, C needs representation.
NamesAreForTheWeak said:
Is this houtengeki's drawing, by the way?

Because it sure as hell looks like houtengeki's art style to me.
It sure is.
A or B, whichever gives answers to how she is controlled first.
NamesAreForTheWeak said:
Is this houtengeki's drawing, by the way?

Because it sure as hell looks like houtengeki's art style to me.
It is. He draws some damn sexy nekomimi and whatever the name is for anubis girls.

I'd logically go for A, but it looks like it'll win anyway, so I'll vote B. I would want to get to know the catgirl anyway.

Diving straight into C.... I'd want that, but it isn't how I'd act.

@hwd171 Sorry to hear about your depression. I'm still dealing with mine. I really hate it. >.<
It's gotta be B!

I' m assuming it's code for 'foreplay'.
Lots of 'A' responses on here.

Add me to the 'A' list.
Well, I can't not say A.

Oh, our hero should be a fiery redhead with a butt that just doesn't quit. It literally cannot stop.
Hmm. Do the bottom statistics represent her or the protagonist?
i'm gonna say A, If i am patient better things will come i think xD
...Yeah, there's no run option, so A.
Banjooie said:
...Yeah, there's no run option, so A.
...Why would you run? So many questions, and she's attractive enough at least. And we can do anything? That's gonna take an explanation before we inevitable move on.
I might as well tally the votes early. 'A' has won by a landslide so, we'll do 'A' leading into 'B'. All we have to do now is decide what our hero should look like. Right now, it seems you want her to be a female neko.

Mr_Face said:
Hmm. Do the bottom statistics represent her or the protagonist?
Protagonist.
HypnoticAura said:
At the risk of sounding boring... my natural, first reaction would be to ask questions.

….and then jump right into the sex. I mean, come on. Sexy neko who is obviously hypnotized in some way.
yeah .... pretty much a then c
I check under the bed for spooks!
Dang it, I'm late. I prefer B, because I would think asking too many questions could lead to bad things from whoever this 'Queen' is (getting too nosy). Plus I'd really like to get to know her.
A.
Also, the number of comments on this is staggering compared to most others
was gonna say a, but b might be a better way to learn about the situation without being nosy
A. Want to make sure this isn't some sort of trap, after all.
A into C. Ask questions then sex it up :D
A. Some context on the situation would be very useful, and might even make the mood even sexier.
hwd171 said:
I might as well tally the votes early. 'A' has won by a landslide so, we'll do 'A' leading into 'B'. All we have to do now is decide what our hero should look like. Right now, it seems you want her to be a female neko.

Protagonist.
As long as it's not the fat guy you see in every H-doujin ever, I'll be fine. That said, another catgirl does sound tempting, especially if she's equally hot.

So, either that or a male version of the same.
just since no one is voting it I choose C
A with a bit of B. Even though survival instincts are too mainstream >_______>
Bobbette said:
...Why would you run? So many questions, and she's attractive enough at least. And we can do anything? That's gonna take an explanation before we inevitable move on.
Fact #1: We've been transported to unfamiliar surroundings.
Fact #2: Our host is capable of rendering catgirls obedient slaves.
Fact #3: Our host would really like it if we were distracted by an obedient catgirl slave.
That says trap to me!
hwd171 said:
I might as well tally the votes early. 'A' has won by a landslide so, we'll do 'A' leading into 'B'. All we have to do now is decide what our hero should look like. Right now, it seems you want her to be a female neko.
hero should be a guy imo but its you're comic
Wait! i change my mind! I'm going with option D. for Ditch this and get out of there man!
Would ask many questions :)
ABC: Ask questions, focusing on her and our situation, finding out why we're here, why and by whom I've been offered an obedient catgirl, how obedient she is and why, and what she's into sexually. Including questions like "what would you do if I asked you to take off your clothes?", "would you enjoy it if I told you to play with yourself while we talk?", "what would you like me to order you to do?", and "what would you do to me if our positions were reversed?" Those questions can give some useful insights into her state of mind, find out more info on her, and lead into more enjoyable sexy fun times.

For example, if she responds to "what would you do if I asked you to take off your clothes?" by taking off her clothes (which I didn't technically order her to do), that suggests that she's either eager to get naked, or her ability to interpret commands is somewhat limited.
invictus said:
A.
Because jumping right into sex without knowing could lead the reader into becoming the next mind controlled slave
This is why I vote A.
lol it looks like I'm the only one who would fuck her first and ask questions later. who cares if I become the next slave honestly, worth it.
Ask questions while sexing

Also, It'd be neat, if maybe not viable, to make the interactions guided but not limited, like in A Questionable Quest.
a. let's get some plot/lore up in here!
hwd171 said:

You: So, you have to answer honestly?

?: Yes, I do. You may ask me anything.

You: Okay. Who are you?

Melanine: My queen calls me "Slave #42"; however, you may call me "Melanine". I'm your designated servant for now.

You: So, where am I? What am I doing here?

Melanine: You're in the trial house. You tried to escape our queen a few days ago during resting hours. The council wanted to have you put through another brainwashing session because of your resistant nature; but, our queen decided to put you though the Trials of Lust instead to see if you truly want your freedom.

You: Trials of Lust?

Melanine: The Trials of Lust is a true test of willpower and chastity. You have to make it to the queen's living quarters without going under the spell of one of the many creatures in her forest. They're very provocative and can put you into a trance if you're not careful.

You: So, what happens if I fail?

Melanine: You'll be put through a rigorous brainwashing session like the others.

You: Oh. Right. What happens if I make it to where she lives?

Melanine: You have to make it through one last test in front of her council. Sadly, No one's ever made it past that point.

You: I wonder why.....

Melanine: Her and the council are very persuasive.

You: When do I go through the trials?

Melanine: Today. I'm supposed to go to the hostess when you're done with me.

You: What do you mean by that?

Melanine: Normally, people who go through the trials have sex with their designated servant before they go about to go through the trials.

You: Well, I'll have to decline the sex. Can't let my lust run loose. Tell the hostess I'm ready, Melanine.

Melanine: Okay then. I'll let her know you're ready.
"A" was the clear winner. Here's the Result of "A"! The next manip should be out this week! For now, decide on if our character should be male or female.
hwd171 said:
"A" was the clear winner. Here's the Result of "A"! The next manip should be out this week! For now, decide on if our character should be male or female.
Damn, that's a tough choice. I say female.
Banjooie said:
Fact #1: We've been transported to unfamiliar surroundings.
Fact #2: Our host is capable of rendering catgirls obedient slaves.
Fact #3: Our host would really like it if we were distracted by an obedient catgirl slave.
That says trap to me!
Fact #4: You have no idea where you are, or what direction would be safe to run to, so running blindly doesn't sound like a good idea.
hwd171 said:
"A" was the clear winner. Here's the Result of "A"! The next manip should be out this week! For now, decide on if our character should be male or female.
Just restating my nomination for female neko here, as more seem to have approved of my nomination than I initially thought. ^_^"

Anyways, just my two cents, but perhaps the next manip's decision would be better handled with a strawpoll for base voting, while leaving the comments for those who wish to elaborate and discuss? Don't get me wrong, if this works for you then by all means stick with it. I'm just thinking that it might clean the comments on the next one up quite a bit to go with a strawpoll.
abithig said:
Just restating my nomination for female neko here, as more seem to have approved of my nomination than I initially thought. ^_^"

Anyways, just my two cents, but perhaps the next manip's decision would be better handled with a strawpoll for base voting, while leaving the comments for those who wish to elaborate and discuss? Don't get me wrong, if this works for you then by all means stick with it. I'm just thinking that it might clean the comments on the next one up quite a bit to go with a strawpoll.
It seems it might be a Female neko since plenty of people want one. As for Strawpoll, I'll most likely do that next time.
hwd171 said:
It seems it might be a Female neko since plenty of people want one.
They always do, don't they? Tossing in my obligatory futile vote for a human male.
Valgaav said:
They always do, don't they? Tossing in my obligatory futile vote for a human male.
Seconded.
Read the story and I think it might be a good idea to make it like a choose your own adventure with all the possibilities and hyperlinks leading to the outcome of each choice. Anybody else agree?
HentaiGuy00 said:
Read the story and I think it might be a good idea to make it like a choose your own adventure with all the possibilities and hyperlinks leading to the outcome of each choice. Anybody else agree?
Too soon *tears stream down face*