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Nothing Personal.
Just Business.
Carrying a story through only dialogue is a lot harder than I expected.
Anyone got any techniques or guidelines for fitting text alongside an image? I don't think I was very efficient here.
Drool said:
Nothing Personal.
Just Business.
Carrying a story through only dialogue is a lot harder than I expected.
Anyone got any techniques or guidelines for fitting text alongside an image? I don't think I was very efficient here.
Seemed okay to me.
looks a lil too boring behind the text , maybe add something?
Text size is too small, you have plenty of space to make it larger and easier to read.
the dialogue was fine, im sure it could be improved in some way but i don't think changing it drastically would be for the better