beifeng_han black_hair business_suit caption caption_only drool_(manipper) earrings femsub forced_employee glowing glowing_eyes hypnotic_eyes jewelry manip miyaura_sanshio office_lady open_mouth original pantyhose purple_eyes resisting text thighhighs

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Drool
>> #127077
Posted on 2016-09-23 11:29:26
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Nothing Personal.
Just Business.
Carrying a story through only dialogue is a lot harder than I expected.
Anyone got any techniques or guidelines for fitting text alongside an image? I don't think I was very efficient here.

warlordson
>> #127096
Posted on 2016-09-23 16:44:31
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Drool said:
Nothing Personal.
Just Business.
Carrying a story through only dialogue is a lot harder than I expected.
Anyone got any techniques or guidelines for fitting text alongside an image? I don't think I was very efficient here.


Seemed okay to me.

TheHypnoPandemonium
>> #127304
Posted on 2016-09-24 12:28:11
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looks a lil too boring behind the text , maybe add something?

johnsmith
>> #127350
Posted on 2016-09-24 19:11:48
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Text size is too small, you have plenty of space to make it larger and easier to read.

Fonzihippo
>> #129656
Posted on 2016-10-04 12:02:17
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the dialogue was fine, im sure it could be improved in some way but i don't think changing it drastically would be for the better

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