Hey guys!
So after seeing DavyBoySmith's "Multiverse Hypno Harem" I was... inspired, let's say. I rather enjoyed the art style and concept of a "Hypno Harem" and thought "You know, I really like the girls of RWBY and the idea of having some of them in a harem... ah, to hell with it. Let's ask DavyBoySmith for Arabatos (The artists) contact information and see what we can do" so I contacted him and a new series was born!
So here's page one of what I'm calling "RWBY Universe H" (H for "Hypno" obviously). Now, to clarify; this takes place in an alternate RWBY timeline where Volume 3 hasn't happened and this is what happens in it's stead because I mean... I don't want to deal with all the annoyances within Volume 3 that could in any way cause issue with my harem of lovely women.
Either way, I have quite a few chapters set up for this. Each chapter will have about 7-10 pages has a different RWBY girl and there are 5 planned Chapters in total as of this time. Anyway, let me know what you guys think about this so far! I'm planning on releasing a new Page every two weeks, however I may have to bump it back to once a month for budgeting but for now, I'm aiming for once every two weeks... this said page two should be up within the week because I just got paid and the commissions will coincide with my being paid. However a good portion of my income also comes from doing gigs with my (rather small-time) band. So if an installment doesn't turn up, don't worry. It just means I likely didn't make enough gigging and had to skip a commission.
Thanks guys, and I'd appreciate any feedback. I may not choose to follow it, but even so, any questions, comments or whatever else's are welcomed!

And I had to re-upload this because the original was too small. HOPEFULLY it worked this time. Really wish there was some sort of "Preview image" thing before posting... Ah well, that saying about begging and choosing and whatnot.

Dang. Maledom and not femdom. But I look forward to what you got planned.

this is so good, thank you for allowing us to see this also <3

tryingtolurk said:
Dang. Maledom and not femdom. But I look forward to what you got planned.

Ah, sorry. I mis-tagged. I meant to put "Maledom" and "Femsub" and, like an idiot, managed to meld both together. Will fix it if I can figure out how. Hahaha

Yukikyun said:
this is so good, thank you for allowing us to see this also <3

I appreciate it! More to come. Just commissioned him for page 2, actually. So expect that around this time next week! From then on it'll be every two weeks but this series is going to be rather long. That is, so long as Arabatos stays on board for making these for me.

Oh, this is gonna be good. Looking forward to more!

Mindcollector13 said:
Ah, sorry. I mis-tagged. I meant to put "Maledom" and "Femsub" and, like an idiot, managed to meld both together. Will fix it if I can figure out how. Hahaha

Nothin to apologise for. I just like femdom over maledom. But I hope it's still great.

This pretty ass fuck going to my HentaiHypnoFolder. ;^)

Oh man! This is looking great!

I'll probably never watch RWBY but I'll certianly keep an eye on this series of comics you'll be cranking out. Can we expect the tone to be light? Cause something I hate in some hypno fan-comics is how they can easily fall into those ugly murky waters of being sexist and it'd be nice it this would avert that.

YES.
PLEASE.

Contorted said:
I'll probably never watch RWBY but I'll certianly keep an eye on this series of comics you'll be cranking out. Can we expect the tone to be light? Cause something I hate in some hypno fan-comics is how they can easily fall into those ugly murky waters of being sexist and it'd be nice it this would avert that.

Well, it depends what you mean by that. For the most part it's pretty light. The Hypnotist won't mistreat the women if that's your concern but there will be sex in later parts. However, currently we're seeing an innocent stage show so it won't be getting too sexual. But later portions will have sex.
Hope I was able to answer your question. If not, could you clarify? I'll try to answer to the best of my ability.

Mindcollector13 said:
Well, it depends what you mean by that. For the most part it's pretty light. The Hypnotist won't mistreat the women if that's your concern but there will be sex in later parts. However, currently we're seeing an innocent stage show so it won't be getting too sexual. But later portions will have sex.
Hope I was able to answer your question. If not, could you clarify? I'll try to answer to the best of my ability.

Oh no, you answered it perfectly. Thank you! Now I'm definitely excited to see more.

Contorted said:
Oh no, you answered it perfectly. Thank you! Now I'm definitely excited to see more.

No problem! Glad to hear you're interested in the series. It's gonna be pretty lengthy so I hope you enjoy the ride.

Looking forward to more. I'm always happy when people are willing to share what they put money down for. And I'm sure Arabatos is happy to be getting a pretty consistent paycheck for a little while.

mixt said:
Looking forward to more. I'm always happy when people are willing to share what they put money down for. And I'm sure Arabatos is happy to be getting a pretty consistent paycheck for a little while.

The way I see it, I paid for it so I may as well get as much enjoyment from it as possible, even by proxy of you guys being able to enjoy it too.
And with both myself and DavyBoySmith regularly commissioning him I'm sure he's happy too. Great turnaround on his art as well. He made this in a week. Pretty impressive since most artists I've commissioned before have taken up to a month to produce a single image.

Contorted said:
I'll probably never watch RWBY but I'll certianly keep an eye on this series of comics you'll be cranking out. Can we expect the tone to be light? Cause something I hate in some hypno fan-comics is how they can easily fall into those ugly murky waters of being sexist and it'd be nice it this would avert that.

...Porn about subverting a woman's freewill and forcing her to do things she normally wouldn't is...sexist when taken to the extreme? You don't say.

Please keep doing this it looks great.

EoD said:
...Porn about subverting a woman's freewill and forcing her to do things she normally wouldn't is...sexist when taken to the extreme? You don't say.

We really gonna get into this now, or can we just get back to just appreciating the post itself? :/

Will there be sexings?

GrandDad said:
Will there be sexings?

Mindcollector13 said:
The Hypnotist won't mistreat the women if that's your concern but there will be sex in later parts. However, currently we're seeing an innocent stage show so it won't be getting too sexual. But later portions will have sex.

Pastel-Daemon said:

sick

GrandDad said:
Will there be sexings?

bobbyskaggs0711 said:
This a good comic can you continue it

Nobody bothers to actually read through the past comments :P

RedCollarBlackCollar said:
Nobody bothers to actually read through the past comments :P

No they do not.

turtleguru said:
Please keep doing this it looks great.

Thanks for your interest! There's more to come, don't worry!

RedCollarBlackCollar said:
Nobody bothers to actually read through the past comments :P

You expect people to actually READ things? :p
But seriously; thanks for your interest and for keeping the comments section on track!

I like where this is going.

This could be fun hehe

I've never seen RWBY but I loves Yang @w@ this is ripped from my fantasies, at least this first page is. <3 Looking forward to more!

JamesF said:
I've never seen RWBY but I loves Yang @w@ this is ripped from my fantasies, at least this first page is. <3 Looking forward to more!

Honestly; the show is decent. I really only watch because like 80% of the cast is made up of attractive anime girls. But I'm glad you're liking the first page! Stay tuned for more!

Very nice page! I'm looking forward to more. ^^

daveyboysmith9 said:
Very nice page! I'm looking forward to more. ^^

Thanks man! Your comic was a huge inspiration so I'm glad you're interested in mine! Looking forward to more of yours as well.

Mindcollector13 said:
Honestly; the show is decent. I really only watch because like 80% of the cast is made up of attractive anime girls. But I'm glad you're liking the first page! Stay tuned for more!

Plus the fighting is always a blast, especially with the creative weaponry.

Oh man, as long as this doesn't instantly cut to her being naked, this is going to be awesome.

Mindcollector13 said:
Thanks man! Your comic was a huge inspiration so I'm glad you're interested in mine! Looking forward to more of yours as well.

Thanks. ^^ That's a very nice compliment. ^^ Chapter 2 is written and will be started in a couple of weeks. ^^

I wish you well with your comic and hope you get lots of followers. ^^

I love the art style of this ^_^

Hawkeye said:
Oh man, as long as this doesn't instantly cut to her being naked, this is going to be awesome.

Don't worry, generally there will be some buildup to the nudity for each girl and (with the exception of one) each girl will get a specific "uniform" so to speak so even after they're initially hypnotized they'll each be in a specific outfit.

Mindcollector13 said:
Don't worry, generally there will be some buildup to the nudity for each girl and (with the exception of one) each girl will get a specific "uniform" so to speak so even after they're initially hypnotized they'll each be in a specific outfit.

Specific outfits for each girl?

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Contorted said:
Specific outfits for each girl?

https://media.giphy.com/media/7MwIBlco42uk0/giphy.gif

Yep. Or rather "Roles" for each girl, most of which come with related outfits. As far as Yang goes, once we get further in I may do a strawpoll for her "role". I have the role for everybody else chosen but I'm torn between two for Yang. Buuut that's a ways off so for now just sit back and enjoy!

This looks good so far. Yang looks sexy in each panel, and the one in which she starts falling under is erotic enough to get one going. I'm definitely interested in seeing how this series progresses. Best of luck with gigging!

Wienerman said:
This looks good so far. Yang looks sexy in each panel, and the one in which she starts falling under is erotic enough to get one going. I'm definitely interested in seeing how this series progresses. Best of luck with gigging!

Thanks man! Glad your interested. Like I said, page two SHOULD be up around Saturday if not sooner.

Contorted said:
I'll probably never watch RWBY but I'll certianly keep an eye on this series of comics you'll be cranking out. Can we expect the tone to be light? Cause something I hate in some hypno fan-comics is how they can easily fall into those ugly murky waters of being sexist and it'd be nice it this would avert that.

The 23rd is fast approaching.

Contorted said:
I'll probably never watch RWBY but I'll certianly keep an eye on this series of comics you'll be cranking out. Can we expect the tone to be light? Cause something I hate in some hypno fan-comics is how they can easily fall into those ugly murky waters of being sexist and it'd be nice it this would avert that.

Sexist in what sense? I don't really think anything a piece of fetish porn does can be sexist as long as the writer doesn't oppose the idea of the same things being done to opposite sex characters in other works (even if due to personal tastes they have no personal interest in depicting that themselves). These things would be awful in real life, but it's all fantasy, and when they specifically happen to women that's only because that's what the writer and/or intended audience happens to be attracted to.

Hawkeye said:
Sexist in what sense? I don't really think anything a piece of fetish porn does can be sexist as long as the writer doesn't oppose the idea of the same things being done to opposite sex characters in other works (even if due to personal tastes they have no personal interest in depicting that themselves). These things would be awful in real life, but it's all fantasy, and when they specifically happen to women that's only because that's what the writer and/or intended audience happens to be attracted to.

I THINK what they meant was that they don't want it to be abusive in any way. Be that physical or verbal. I was saying that there won't be anything along those lines.

Hawkeye said:
Sexist in what sense? I don't really think anything a piece of fetish porn does can be sexist as long as the writer doesn't oppose the idea of the same things being done to opposite sex characters in other works (even if due to personal tastes they have no personal interest in depicting that themselves). These things would be awful in real life, but it's all fantasy, and when they specifically happen to women that's only because that's what the writer and/or intended audience happens to be attracted to.

Mindcollector13 said:
I THINK what they meant was that they don't want it to be abusive in any way. Be that physical or verbal. I was saying that there won't be anything along those lines.

What Mindcollector13 said. I'll choose better language next time.

So small update for anyone still looking at this. Page 2 has been delayed a bit. Arabatos (the artist) had some computer issues so, sadly, the page will not be here until he fixes it/gets a new computer. But rest assured it IS coming soon!

Mindcollector13 said:
So small update for anyone still looking at this. Page 2 has been delayed a bit. Arabatos (the artist) had some computer issues so, sadly, the page will not be here until he fixes it/gets a new computer. But rest assured it IS coming soon!

Ah. Good. I was wondering about that.

Contorted said:
Ah. Good. I was wondering about that.

Yep. That said I don't know WHEN it's coming. I asked for an update yesterday and he has not replied and normally he tends to reply VERY quickly so I am assuming he is still working out getting a new computer. Hopefully it happens soon but if not then I'm saving the cost of one commission from him from each check. So honestly if it takes him another 2 months we'll have a rapid fire off of about 8 pages.

Mindcollector13 said:
Yep. That said I don't know WHEN it's coming. I asked for an update yesterday and he has not replied and normally he tends to reply VERY quickly so I am assuming he is still working out getting a new computer. Hopefully it happens soon but if not then I'm saving the cost of one commission from him from each check. So honestly if it takes him another 2 months we'll have a rapid fire off of about 8 pages.

Any updates on the matter? It's been a while. No rush or anything, I'm just curious.

ThatOneGuy15 said:
Any updates on the matter? It's been a while. No rush or anything, I'm just curious.

Actually, yes. When he finishes sketching he sends the sketch before coloring. Once the coloring is done he sends the full version. I have gotten the sketch from him so unless something else came up on his end I'd guess we'all be seeing page two very soon!

Mindcollector13 said:
Actually, yes. When he finishes sketching he sends the sketch before coloring. Once the coloring is done he sends the full version. I have gotten the sketch from him so unless something else came up on his end I'd guess we'all be seeing page two very soon!

Like "This week" very soon?

Contorted said:
Like "This week" very soon?

Very likely, yes. However I got the Sketch about 3 days ago and to be honest I'm surprised I haven't gotten the completed version yet. Hoping "very soon" may mean "tonight" but as I said, I don't really know when EXACTLY I'll get it.

Mindcollector13 said:
Very likely, yes. However I got the Sketch about 3 days ago and to be honest I'm surprised I haven't gotten the completed version yet. Hoping "very soon" may mean "tonight" but as I said, I don't really know when EXACTLY I'll get it.

You got the picture yet? I hate being so confrontational but I am... excited for it, to say the least.

ThatOneGuy15 said:
You got the picture yet? I hate being so confrontational but I am... excited for it, to say the least.

Sadly, no. As annoying as it is I havent heard from Arabatos since I got the sketch.
Trust me, I get being confrontational. I've been e-mailing Arabatos every few days.
I'm ASSUMING something came up while he was finishing it up because he does seem very punctual and expedient.

New update;
Arabatos just got back to me. He apparently uses an iPad or something similar when touching up and coloring his work. THAT is what broke, not his computer. However his english is not too great so him explaining it, he said his Pad was a "computer".
He said he just got it replaced and that the finished product WILL be here by the weekend.

That said, that means I'm 2 paychecks delayed. So barring any other unforseen circumstances that means page 2 is this weekend, 3 is next weekend, 4 is the following.

Mindcollector13 said:
New update;
Arabatos just got back to me. He apparently uses an iPad or something similar when touching up and coloring his work. THAT is what broke, not his computer. However his english is not too great so him explaining it, he said his Pad was a "computer".
He said he just got it replaced and that the finished product WILL be here by the weekend.

That said, that means I'm 2 paychecks delayed. So barring any other unforseen circumstances that means page 2 is this weekend, 3 is next weekend, 4 is the following.

Thanks for the update. I'll lay low until it shows up.

Mindcollector13 said:
New update;
Arabatos just got back to me. He apparently uses an iPad or something similar when touching up and coloring his work. THAT is what broke, not his computer. However his english is not too great so him explaining it, he said his Pad was a "computer".
He said he just got it replaced and that the finished product WILL be here by the weekend.

That said, that means I'm 2 paychecks delayed. So barring any other unforseen circumstances that means page 2 is this weekend, 3 is next weekend, 4 is the following.

Bro

Weekends gone m8

ThatOneGuy15 said:
Bro

Weekends gone m8

Let's not pester the guy too much. In my experience, that just makes them quit halfway through.

GrandDad said:
Let's not pester the guy too much. In my experience, that just makes them quit halfway through.

Yeah you're right. Sorry about that

ThatOneGuy15 said:
Yeah you're right. Sorry about that

To be fair; it is still Sunday for me.
And form my experience with Arabatos thus far I wont get the next page until late tonight. I'm expecting it in the next few hours. Honestly, though, at this point it's all up to Arabatos. I paid and commissioned, but the rest of the work is on him.
That said "Can't rush greatness" and all.

Femdum... femdum... harem... harem... ooooohh yyeeeeessss...