absurdres arabatos blonde_hair chicken cleavage expressionless femsub large_breasts long_hair maledom midriff original pet_play purple_eyes rwby shrunken_irises text western yang_xiao_long

Edit | Respond

Page two of the RWBY Universe-H Comic series illustrated by Arabatos and written and commissioned by yours truly.
Ah, the old "You're a chicken!" cliche. Classic! But it looks like things are about to heat up. That is, IF our Hypnotist is willing to let an innocent young lass expose herself in public... is he willing to go that far to entertain his audience, though?
Tune in next time to find out!
Sorry this is so late! Arabatos's computer apparently broke so he had to get a new one before he could finish this up. I think it was worth the wait, though!
As well, I'd just like to thank you guys. The response to page one was incredible and I really appreciate all of the good words. I mean, the first page was the most popular image for almost a week which is awesome! And yeah, I get that it isn't technically MY artwork. I didn't actually make it, but the concept, scripting and overall idea was mine so I personally think I should get some credit for it. If you disagree, I see why. However it doesn't change my feeling of appreciation of the response to it.
Now, I do have a BIT of potentially bad news. But it's nothing *too* crazy. I may have to scale these back to once a month; at least for now. I had a rather large expense recently and, as a college student making monthly loan payments anyways, I kinda need the extra money until I catch up a bit from that expense. BUT as time goes on I will try to get back to doing 2 a month.
Either way, the next page SHOULD be out next week!
And again, any questions, comments or feedback of any kind is greatly appreciated and I'll try to respond to any of your queries!

OH! And I have no clue how to mark page one as this page's "parent" or how to put this or the first page into the pool I've just created for this series. If anyone could do so for me, and/or explain how one does this, it'd be appreciated.
EDIT: Nevermind, got the Pools thing worked out. The "RWBY Universe H" Pool is now up.
That was me saying "MAKE HER STRIP!"
Cock cock cock ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
ecchime said:
That was me saying "MAKE HER STRIP!"
I like it you should have "MAKE HER STRIP TO HER UNDERWEAR OR NOTHING!"
candycolouredclown said:
Cock cock cock ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Seeing your avatar next to that is kind of funny.
bobbyskaggs0711 said:
I like it you should have "MAKE HER STRIP TO HER UNDERWEAR OR NOTHING!"
That would be pretty redundant... stripping generally leads to underwear or nakedness. It's sort of implied by the term stripping
We need more chicken hypnosis on the hub... And maybe stupification...
Act like a chicken. Gotta respect the classics :P

Also more hypnosis shows need more girls stripping. That guy yelling is a smart person indeed
bullet said:
That would be pretty redundant... stripping generally leads to underwear or nakedness. It's sort of implied by the term stripping
Yeah Bullet you know what I'm talking about
All hypno comics (I think..) the page 3 is strip. :^)
She's a chicken, I tell you, a giant chicken!
DouDile said:
All hypno comics (I think..) the page 3 is strip. :^)
So what you're telling me is that hypno-comics are newspapers?
some random guy in the crowd said:
MAKE HER STRIP!
My thoughts:
You aren't wrong. Hopefully the next page comes a bit more... expediently.
This is awesome...what the heck, where do I start

Yang is beautiful, the coloring is nice. There's no eye effects but her expression really says 'entranced' still! I even like her eyes in the chicken panel, it's perfect~ she's totally under and it's great

Thankyu thankyu thankyu
JamesF said:
This is awesome...what the heck, where do I start

Yang is beautiful, the coloring is nice. There's no eye effects but her expression really says 'entranced' still! I even like her eyes in the chicken panel, it's perfect~ she's totally under and it's great

Thankyu thankyu thankyu
Yeah. Arabatos is really, REALLY talented which is why I'm willing to pay him to make these, and willing to deal with his knack for being a bit tardy when it comes to getting the final product to me. This is only page two but to be honest, I always feel like it's "worth it" when the final product comes.
She's so sexy in this art style <3 I love her dazed pose and expression in the first panel! Can't wait for more
Why does he remind me of Tony Stark?
zach007 said:
Why does he remind me of Tony Stark?
I can kinda see it. Hahaha. Honestly I didn't give Arabatos any specifics on how I wanted him to look. So he may have drawn some inspiration from Tony. Though, this whole "hypnotizing beautiful girls" thing does seem like something Tony would do. At least, pre-Iron Man Tony, anyways.
StepfordCrimson said:
Act like a chicken. Gotta respect the classics :P

Also more hypnosis shows need more girls stripping. That guy yelling is a smart person indeed
If talking about real life, I don't think they will do it.

zach007 said:
Why does he remind me of Tony Stark?
He actually reminds me of his dad
I'm honestly glad that I havent seen wcting acting like a chicken be someone's fetish.

...yet.
Also, I have a question. Will the next chapter come immediately after this one ends, or will there be breaks inbetween?
GrandDad said:
I'm honestly glad that I havent seen wcting acting like a chicken be someone's fetish.

...yet.
Also, I have a question. Will the next chapter come immediately after this one ends, or will there be breaks inbetween?
If you mean "will there be breaks between me commissioning?" probably not. But that really depends on how I am financially at that point. In theory it should just go right into the next chapter.
If you mean "Does chapter 2 start right after 1 story wise?" then yes.
Lyon said:
Beautiful expression.
Agreed, so much. I think the indication of hypnosis can be better though; the smaller irises are lovely, but Arabatos (the artist) could easily remove the pupils and highlights to make the eyes empty as well.
Sorry to be picky but this is near perfect! Could you get this request in mindcollector? :P
omg that dude has no eyes
RelaxDude said:
Agreed, so much. However the indication of hypnosis can be better; the smaller irises are lovely, but Arabatos (the artist) could easily remove the pupils and highlights to make the eyes empty as well.
Sorry to be picky but this is near perfect! Could you get this request in mindcollector? :P
The issue is that Arabatos is not too great with English. The captions are copy pasted from what I ask for, but everything else is based on what he understands. I asked for "spiral eyes" in the first page and he didnt do it. It was fine because page 1 was her being hypnotized so I figured I could have him do it in page 2 for once she IS hypnotized, but when I brought it up he just got confused, not understanding what I wanted.
crazyman said:
omg that dude has no eyes
Eyes are overrated. :p
Besides, you could just imagine he has "Brock syndrome"
Mindcollector13 said:
The issue is that Arabatos is not too great with English. The captions are copy pasted from what I ask for, but everything else is based on what he understands. I asked for "spiral eyes" in the first page and he didnt do it. It was fine because page 1 was her being hypnotized so I figured I could have him do it in page 2 for once she IS hypnotized, but when I brought it up he just got confused, not understanding what I wanted.
I see, that's a bummer. Darn language barrier.
Is it just me or is her shorts shorter than they were in the previous picture?
Contorted said:
Is it just me or is her shorts shorter than they were in the previous picture?
Just a bit, but yeah. They do look a little shorter now... not that I'm complaining.
Mindcollector13 said:
The issue is that Arabatos is not too great with English. The captions are copy pasted from what I ask for, but everything else is based on what he understands. I asked for "spiral eyes" in the first page and he didnt do it. It was fine because page 1 was her being hypnotized so I figured I could have him do it in page 2 for once she IS hypnotized, but when I brought it up he just got confused, not understanding what I wanted.
THIS WAS GONNA HAVE SWIRLY EYES? *CRIES EXTERNALLY*
Very nice. Would be even better with the spiral eyes mentioned
I am looking forward to the next page
Arabatos could have one of the bests drawing levels...
Very nice page! I don't know how I missed this, but its really wonderful to see! Love the chicken command and can't wait for the next page. ^^
Man, I find I really like Arabatos's art when they aren't giving girls freakishly ginormous breasts. The Hypno Harem thing was just about all on this site I saw of their art and I wasn't sure if they did normal proportions until this series came out.
Hawkeye said:
Man, I find I really like Arabatos's art when they aren't giving girls freakishly ginormous breasts. The Hypno Harem thing was just about all on this site I saw of their art and I wasn't sure if they did normal proportions until this series came out.
The larger breasts are specific to Davy's Hypno Harem. Honestly; I dont mind the larger breasts but for me, I prefer my series to have normal proportions. That said, some of the girls in RWBY have rather flat chests. I dont know how Arabatos will deal with them once we get there, but we'll see.
daveyboysmith9 said:
Very nice page! I don't know how I missed this, but its really wonderful to see! Love the chicken command and can't wait for the next page. ^^
I could say the same for you! Looking forward to the next M.H.H. page.
And thanks for the compliments!
Way u didn't post the rest ? The last page was about 9 data ago
Kqpz said:
Way u didn't post the rest ? The last page was about 9 data ago
Be patient. From my experience it takes longer then predicted to get these things uploaded and even with the wait it is 110% worth it when they show up. Sooner or later another one will come.
ThatOneGuy15 said:
Be patient. From my experience it takes longer then predicted to get these things uploaded and even with the wait it is 110% worth it when they show up. Sooner or later another one will come.
Couldn't have said it better myself. Arabatos tends to... overpromise. For example; he told me page 1 of this could be done in 3 days. In reality, it took 2 weeks. He said page 2 would be done in a week. It took a month, though that was due to tech stuff. I wasn't given a timeframe this time but I cant imagine it'll take much longer.
Mindcollector13 said:
Couldn't have said it better myself. Arabatos tends to... overpromise. For example; he told me page 1 of this could be done in 3 days. In reality, it took 2 weeks. He said page 2 would be done in a week. It took a month, though that was due to tech stuff. I wasn't given a timeframe this time but I cant imagine it'll take much longer.
But to be fair, it has been almost 2 1/2 weeks. Any updates?
we can't have her strip just like that ;)
where's the showmanship in that, should have her do a few more silly suggestions and build up to her striping.
So a bit of bad news, guys... It seems that Arabatos has vanished. I havent heard from him and, from what I gather, neither has anybody else...
Soooo we've a bit of a hiatus until I find someone else with an art style I like who is willing to work with me OR Arabatos resurfaces. Kinda sucks since I already paid for page 3. If I dont hear back from Arabatos by Christmas I'll put something on the forum to see if I can find someone else to help me out here.

Sorry guys. This disappoints me as much as it does you, believe me.
But such is life.
Mindcollector13 said:
So a bit of bad news, guys... It seems that Arabatos has vanished. I havent heard from him and, from what I gather, neither has anybody else...
Soooo we've a bit of a hiatus until I find someone else with an art style I like who is willing to work with me OR Arabatos resurfaces. Kinda sucks since I already paid for page 3. If I dont hear back from Arabatos by Christmas I'll put something on the forum to see if I can find someone else to help me out here.

Sorry guys. This disappoints me as much as it does you, believe me.
But such is life.
Shit. You haven't payed him for the next page yet have you? Because if you have it's really dirty of him to vanish without saying something.
EoD said:
Shit. You haven't payed him for the next page yet have you? Because if you have it's really dirty of him to vanish without saying something.
I have paid him, yeah. I feel like he'll resurface eventually but at the same time... eh... I may try to find someone a little more reliable, which sucks since I absolutely adore Arabatos's work.
Update pt 2:
So for those of you who follow DaveyBoySmith on Deviantart you'll likely have seen that he just got the sketch for the next page of his comic from Arabatos. In my eyes, this likely means I'll be getting the sketch of page 3 soon and, likely, the completed page by this weekend.
And honestly it only took him, what, 3 weeks? Not too bad since a lot of artists of his skill take a month or more. I may stick with him.
Mindcollector13 said:
Update pt 2:
So for those of you who follow DaveyBoySmith on Deviantart you'll likely have seen that he just got the sketch for the next page of his comic from Arabatos. In my eyes, this likely means I'll be getting the sketch of page 3 soon and, likely, the completed page by this weekend.
And honestly it only took him, what, 3 weeks? Not too bad since a lot of artists of his skill take a month or more. I may stick with him.
Noice
Small update: have the sketch and Arabatos has apologized profusely about the delay. I think he may have been having some sort of personal issue. That said; expect page 3 within the next few days!
Hopefully we can get page 4 in a more reasonable time frame now that Arabatos seems to have worked out his issue.
will the hypnotist make Yang strip for the sake of entertainment, or will he refuse to keep the young girls's dignity.

Find out next time on DRAGON BALL Z

LUL
Mindcollector13 said:
Small update: have the sketch and Arabatos has apologized profusely about the delay. I think he may have been having some sort of personal issue. That said; expect page 3 within the next few days!
Hopefully we can get page 4 in a more reasonable time frame now that Arabatos seems to have worked out his issue.
Any chance page 3 will be up by Christmas? It'd make a great Christmas present ;)
ThatOneGuy15 said:
Any chance page 3 will be up by Christmas? It'd make a great Christmas present ;)
Here's hoping. I havent heard back from Arabatos but honestly at this point I'm checking my e-mail at 11AM, 5PM, 11PM and 1AM because those seem to be the times he replies to e-mails and sends stuff out. But I will say that, based on the sketch, it will be worth the wait. ;)
Anything yet? I guess asking is kinda redundant because it will probably be uploaded when you do but I kinda feel like posting so here I am
That escalated quickly.
ThatOneGuy15 said:
Anything yet? I guess asking is kinda redundant because it will probably be uploaded when you do but I kinda feel like posting so here I am
Holy shit just be patient. It's his commission, so why are you pestering him? You think he's holding it all to himself at this point? He might as well be if you keep doing this sorta crap.
I'm just waiting to get the finished version from Arabatos. Honestly at this point I wouldn't expect this series to regularly update as I had originally planned. Arabatos isn't quite as efficient as I had originally thought but something about his style keeps me from finding someone else to continue the series. Plus anyone else of his caliber is... incredibly pricey.

Either way, I'm not sure WHEN it's coming but rest assured it IS coming.
RedCollarBlackCollar said:
Holy shit just be patient. It's his commission, so why are you pestering him? You think he's holding it all to himself at this point? He might as well be if you keep doing this sorta crap.
Jesus dude chill out. I can't help being impatient, it's a trait. If it makes you feel better Ill stop posting and won't say anything at all on the next one.
ThatOneGuy15 said:
Jesus dude chill out. I can't help being impatient, it's a trait. If it makes you feel better Ill stop posting and won't say anything at all on the next one.
I apologize as far as coming off harshly; I just think constantly asking the commissioner is a bit much, considering it's out of their hands. I don't blame ya for wanting to see another juicy page of a comic like this.
RedCollarBlackCollar said:
I apologize as far as coming off harshly; I just think constantly asking the commissioner is a bit much, considering it's out of their hands. I don't blame ya for wanting to see another juicy page of a comic like this.
Well I guess I came along kinda harsh too. I'm sure we all have the same goal here so let's just get along. We're all here for the same reason
Happy new year everyone! Let's hope for a much better year this time. I don't think 2016 was a great year for anyone at all
Quick question, does page 3 appear to have any nudity in it? Just curious.

Keep in mind that this is NOT me asking if you have the page yet, I'm just wondering
The faces in this strip are great! Especially in the last one,her face gives off a feel of prompt but confused submission. Almost as if her unconscience is in a sort of flux at the sudden taming of her usual brash and cocky personality. She for "some reason" cannot understands what is happening to her (something about a show?)but is too bewildered and suddenly too obdient to do anything more than glance tepidly at the man in front of her...

Why aren't there more faces like this in hypno works?
master226 said:
So....this got turned into a meme... http://knowyourmeme.com/photos/1261689-rwby
The fact it's a meme is hilarious. That meme itself though...