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wow i can't believe how long this took, one month i was working on this. So a month ago i realized that i haven't drawn anything with Gaiaku and Tanya Song (another original character of mine). Decided to go with a metronome and use design doll as a drawing reference probably have some things to fix for next time what do you guys think?
"Let me touch your body emo-girl...yeh, that's right" :^)
DouDile said:
"Let me touch your body emo-girl...yeh, that's right" :^)
HELL YEAH!!!!!!!!
It's very.... Inconsistent.
DHB said:
It's very.... Inconsistent.
in what way?
AmatureManga said:
in what way?
>His right hand's thumb is elongated, and the pinky's oddly shortened.
>Her waist is super stretched out and elongated.
>Her left eye is way too large to be a trick of perspective.
>Metronome body's perspective isn't aligned to the part of it that's supposed to go back and forth. It's just kinda sticking out there...
>Not sure what's going on between the guy's shoulder and neck, why it raises itself behind the neck.
>>I know we don't see too much of the guy's left leg nor arm, but for we do see, you made his body way too wide which throws things off.

For all things I pointed out, don't let it discourage you; just some things to try and think of with any future stuff ya do.
RedCollarBlackCollar said:
>His right hand's thumb is elongated, and the pinky's oddly shortened.
>Her waist is super stretched out and elongated.
>Her left eye is way too large to be a trick of perspective.
>Metronome body's perspective isn't aligned to the part of it that's supposed to go back and forth. It's just kinda sticking out there...
>Not sure what's going on between the guy's shoulder and neck, why it raises itself behind the neck.
>>I know we don't see too much of the guy's left leg nor arm, but for we do see, you made his body way too wide which throws things off.

For all things I pointed out, don't let it discourage you; just some things to try and think of with any future stuff ya do.
Thanks for the advice to be honest I was using Design Doll to get the anatomy as right as I get it but obviously I still need work on some stuff like for example sure Design Doll supplies with how to draw the anatomy however it only supplies the anatomy based on how you made the model if something anatomy wise is wrong it won't tell you that something is wrong in the anatomy and also I know it may sound silly but the belly button is good reference point for me where to draw the clothes and Design Doll doesn't have belly buttons so I was guessing on where the waist and panties go. Thanks again for the advice I will definitely keep it in mind for next time
AmatureManga said:
Thanks for the advice to be honest I was using Design Doll to get the anatomy as right as I get it but obviously I still need work on some stuff like for example sure Design Doll supplies with how to draw the anatomy however it only supplies the anatomy based on how you made the model if something anatomy wise is wrong it won't tell you that something is wrong in the anatomy and also I know it may sound silly but the belly button is good reference point for me where to draw the clothes and Design Doll doesn't have belly buttons so I was guessing on where the waist and panties go. Thanks again for the advice I will definitely keep it in mind for next time
1. Reference images are good to at least utilize when applicable. You can't copy them down perfectly for what you'd want in your pic, but they're there to help give you a rough idea of how things work like the perspective going on.
2. Not trying to be rude, but cmon man; add some punctuation to your response. That was a really long run-on sentence to read •_____•