Decided to make Asriel look alittle more dommy this time and removed the toothbrush-looking riding crop I gave him and gave him a new one.
BimboVixen said: Oh I sure as hell will. But. on the other hand.. I legitametly can't stop thinking that looks like a tooth brush. "Be my slave,and have amazing oral hygine!"
I just quoted that so you could see the funny imitation done. But anyway, I fixed the riding crop issues, gave Asriel a better collar, gave him thigh-boots to wear and other stuff. Enjoy. -waverun
Argonis said: I'm gonna be honest with my criticism I can't tell the difference between this and the parent post .
Look at 'em side by side. Like I said, I changed the leggings, changed the collar, and changed the crop. There's also no eye mist coming out of Asriel's glowing eye.
If you look in the parent post really closely you'll see Asriel's feet instead of the thigh boots.
And according to someone else, the riding crop in the parent post looks like a toothbrush.
Decided to make Asriel look alittle more dommy this time and removed the toothbrush-looking riding crop I gave him and gave him a new one.
I just quoted that so you could see the funny imitation done. But anyway, I fixed the riding crop issues, gave Asriel a better collar, gave him thigh-boots to wear and other stuff. Enjoy. -waverun
I hope I didn't insult you at all ^^: I didn't mean that to sound rude if it did.
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Decided to make Asriel look alittle more dommy this time and removed the toothbrush-looking riding crop I gave him and gave him a new one.
Oh I sure as hell will. But. on the other hand.. I legitametly can't stop thinking that looks like a tooth brush. "Be my slave,and have amazing oral hygine!"
I just quoted that so you could see the funny imitation done. But anyway, I fixed the riding crop issues, gave Asriel a better collar, gave him thigh-boots to wear and other stuff. Enjoy.
-waverun
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I'm gonna be honest with my criticism I can't tell the difference between this and the parent post .
Look at 'em side by side. Like I said, I changed the leggings, changed the collar, and changed the crop. There's also no eye mist coming out of Asriel's glowing eye.
If you look in the parent post really closely you'll see Asriel's feet instead of the thigh boots.
And according to someone else, the riding crop in the parent post looks like a toothbrush.
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Ok i notice the differences now thanks for pointing them out.
You're welcome.
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There we go, much better.
Decided to make Asriel look alittle more dommy this time and removed the toothbrush-looking riding crop I gave him and gave him a new one.
I just quoted that so you could see the funny imitation done. But anyway, I fixed the riding crop issues, gave Asriel a better collar, gave him thigh-boots to wear and other stuff. Enjoy.
-waverun
I hope I didn't insult you at all ^^: I didn't mean that to sound rude if it did.
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I hope I didn't insult you at all ^^: I didn't mean that to sound rude if it did.
Oh no it's fine. I found your imitation funny.
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