Hi everyone! Here is the next page in Chapter 2 of The Multiverse Hypno Harem! April K.O's the second thug and stands triumphantly over the two criminals! What happen's next you might ask? Stay tuned to find out!
I hope you all like it! The art was done by Arabatoso@gmail.com and is posted with permission. Enjoy! ^^
Uhhhmmm thug in panel one should lose his hand, because if I'm not mistaken the edge of Apris fan is supposed to be razor sharp <<youtu.be/LQTMrjlw6kI?t=8|Observe>>
hypnofan100 said: Uhhhmmm thug in panel one should lose his hand, because if I'm not mistaken the edge of Apris fan is supposed to be razor sharp <<youtu.be/LQTMrjlw6kI?t=8|Observe>>
Your right, but I'm going to use the excuse that April is much better trained at this point in the series and knows just how hard to throw the fan to disarm a thug without actually disarming a thug. XD But I'll be sure to remember that in future chapters. ^^
daveyboysmith9 said: Your right, but I'm going to use the excuse that April is much better trained at this point in the series and knows just how hard to throw the fan to disarm a thug without actually disarming a thug. XD But I'll be sure to remember that in future chapters. ^^
It is kinda sad that in every panel instead of enjoying an overproportioned teenage april in a mc story I go straight to nitpicking. XD But thanks to your explanation my suspension of disbelief kicks in. Thanks
hypnofan100 said: It is kinda sad that in every panel instead of enjoying an overproportioned teenage april in a mc story I go straight to nitpicking. XD But thanks to your explanation my suspension of disbelief kicks in. Thanks
No worries. I'm still a bit new to writing and it helps. ^^ I am glad your enjoying the comic. Page 6 has been commissioned so I hope to hear from the artist in a couple of weeks. ^^
Honestly, the proportions just bother me. They're bigger than her head, and don't really fit the rest of her body. I understand making her breasts bigger, but there is such a thing as too much.
Masta said: Honestly, the proportions just bother me. They're bigger than her head, and don't really fit the rest of her body. I understand making her breasts bigger, but there is such a thing as too much.
There's never too much. Well, my too much is bigger than the torso, but that's cause I'm a sucker for huge tits, no pun intended.
Daveyboysmith9, let me say what folks are having trouble finding the right words for:
"Thank you for paying for artwork that meets your tastes, and sharing it with us even if it doesn't particularly match our own interests. We have paid nothing ourselves and otherwise would not have seen anything at all."
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I hope you all like it! The art was done by Arabatoso@gmail.com and is posted with permission. Enjoy! ^^
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Uhhhmmm thug in panel one should lose his hand, because if I'm not mistaken the edge of Apris fan is supposed to be razor sharp <<youtu.be/LQTMrjlw6kI?t=8|Observe>>
Your right, but I'm going to use the excuse that April is much better trained at this point in the series and knows just how hard to throw the fan to disarm a thug without actually disarming a thug. XD But I'll be sure to remember that in future chapters. ^^
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Your right, but I'm going to use the excuse that April is much better trained at this point in the series and knows just how hard to throw the fan to disarm a thug without actually disarming a thug. XD But I'll be sure to remember that in future chapters. ^^
It is kinda sad that in every panel instead of enjoying an overproportioned teenage april in a mc story I go straight to nitpicking. XD
But thanks to your explanation my suspension of disbelief kicks in. Thanks
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It is kinda sad that in every panel instead of enjoying an overproportioned teenage april in a mc story I go straight to nitpicking. XD
But thanks to your explanation my suspension of disbelief kicks in. Thanks
No worries. I'm still a bit new to writing and it helps. ^^ I am glad your enjoying the comic. Page 6 has been commissioned so I hope to hear from the artist in a couple of weeks. ^^
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Honestly, the proportions just bother me. They're bigger than her head, and don't really fit the rest of her body. I understand making her breasts bigger, but there is such a thing as too much.
There's never too much. Well, my too much is bigger than the torso, but that's cause I'm a sucker for huge tits, no pun intended.
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There's never too much. Well, my too much is bigger than the torso, but that's cause I'm a sucker for huge tits, no pun intended.
Honestly, I've seen ecchi series with better proportions. Plus, those look like she just glued a pair of Extra-Large basketballs to her chest.
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"Thank you for paying for artwork that meets your tastes, and sharing it with us even if it doesn't particularly match our own interests. We have paid nothing ourselves and otherwise would not have seen anything at all."