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I did it my first manip I think I did it right I probably didn't and I hope I failed
shinylamp said:
I did it my first manip I think I did it right I probably didn't and I hope I failed
It has a few spelling mistakes,like it's clothes, not cloths and when spelling ill in the term I will, it's spelled I'll, and it's sure not shure, just a few spelling mistakes.
I like this a lot ^^
But if I may suggest one thing, it would be to avoid making the text cover the image, it makes it harder to read and doesn't look too pretty.
That being said, nice choice of pic :)
shinylamp said:
I hope I failed
So listen

I have good news.
This dialogue is just fucking amazing
pokemongirl said:
MOO~
Blessedbycows said:
MOOO
*gets the milking buckets*
Ow my body feels strange what was in that milk?
TalahDarkfang said:
*gets the milking buckets*
YOULL NEVER MILK ME ALIVE! *jumps out window*
hypfrosis said:
Ow my body feels strange what was in that milk?
Ask tiny he's the one that gave it to her
Blessedbycows said:
YOULL NEVER MILK ME ALIVE! *jumps out window*
Stop scaring tiny you know he hates being milked ever since the accident
shinylamp said:
Stop scaring tiny you know he hates being milked ever since the axedent
Axedent XD
How is "Quality Control" a reason to flag something for Quality Control?
EoD said:
How is "Quality Control" a reason to flag something for Quality Control?
I have no idea but I've seen that a lot recently.
JoshDehu said:
I have no idea but I've seen that a lot recently.
I expected it to suck it's my first try
EoD said:
How is "Quality Control" a reason to flag something for Quality Control?
Because that's how flagging works?

You flag something for quality control and they decide if it's good enough to stay.
Timo4545 said:
Because that's how flagging works?

You flag something for quality control and they decide if it's good enough to stay.
No. What you *should* be doing is saying exactly *what* the quality issues you're having are. In this case, a better flag would be "Text is nigh-unreadable through all the spelling and grammar issues".
NamesAreForTheWeak said:
No. What you *should* be doing is saying exactly *what* the quality issues you're having are. In this case, a better flag would be "Text is nigh-unreadable through all the spelling and grammar issues".
In my defense I'm diclixic so grammar and spelling are always a problem for me
shinylamp said:
In my defense I'm diclixic so grammar and spelling are always a problem for me
Then it might be a good idea to get someone to proofread your stuff before uploading. There might already be a thread for that on the forum.
NamesAreForTheWeak said:
Then it might be a good idea to get someone to proofread your stuff before uploading. There might already be a thread for that on the forum.
Ya I know I was actually uploading it because I wanted it to be criticized by people so I could learn for the next one
shinylamp said:
Ya I know I was actually uploading it because I wanted it to be criticized by people so I could learn for the next one
In the future, you definitely should ask someone to go over the text.