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bodysuit caption cleavage corrin_(fire_emblem) corruption empty_eyes expressionless female_only femdom femsub fire_emblem fire_emblem_awakening fire_emblem_fates glowing glowing_eyes grima_(fire_emblem_awakening) long_hair magic manip multiple_girls nintendo nokista_22 panties possession princess robin_(fire_emblem_awakening) text underwear white_hair yes-my-grima_(manipper) yuri

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Yes-My-Grima
>> #243226
Posted on 2018-03-30 08:15:47
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Hey guys! This is my first post, and also my first manip. If you guys have any thoughts for improvement, just let me know! Also, feel free to add tags if i missed any
LOlivia
>> #243228
Posted on 2018-03-30 08:20:47
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>Nokista has already made fem!Grima

Giggity.

As for critiques... Grima's text color does not work well with the background color, and all the text is just rather thin and annoying to try reading. Perhaps usage of a broader font is in order?
Nightington
>> #243229
Posted on 2018-03-30 08:23:06
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The red-on-purple is difficult to read, but the manip itself looks great. A bolder font may be desirable in future work.
Yes-My-Grima
>> #243230
Posted on 2018-03-30 08:44:21
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Nightington said:
The red-on-purple is difficult to read, but the manip itself looks great. A bolder font may be desirable in future work.


yeah, i was aware of that pre-post, but honestly the software i was using to manip it (firealpaca) has really weird fonts. ill try to fix that in the future!
RedCollarBlackCollar
>> #243272
Posted on 2018-03-30 14:19:23
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Please remember to tag yourself as a manipper, the post as a manip, and always add the original artist's name:
artist:nokista_22
artist:yes-my-grima_(manipper)
(This time I did it, but for future reference please rememeber to)
Grima180
>> #243416
Posted on 2018-03-31 04:27:43
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Huh, well this is a tad bit awkward. Good work regardless.
Professor-Celestino
>> #246965
Posted on 2018-04-17 13:58:18
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Yes-My-Grima said:
yeah, i was aware of that pre-post, but honestly the software i was using to manip it (firealpaca) has really weird fonts. ill try to fix that in the future!


FireAlpaca uses your installed system fonts and it does not do any independent font management, so either you don't have fonts installed on your computer that aren't “weird”, or there's something seriously wrong.
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