3d black_hair bottomless cat efuman fake_animal_ears female_only femdom femsub long_hair pet_play  text trigger

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laststand0810
>> #274634
Posted on 2018-08-11 18:58:14
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IDPet, I think your translation is wrong, the above means: "Isn't Koto-chan Toshiya's pet?" means that Kaguya is giving Toshiya a hypnosis suggestion, the previous page is also wrong, it means: "hm? What is not right?"

laststand0810
>> #274636
Posted on 2018-08-11 19:15:13
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.... actually there's a lot of places you have improvised in the whole story thread, i think I can fix some if you want, not 100% correct but a bit better and closer to the story line, i'll work on it tomorrow if it's ok with you.

IDPet
>> #274637
Posted on 2018-08-11 19:16:57
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laststand0810 said:
IDPet, I think your translation is wrong, the above means: "Isn't Koto-chan Toshiya's pet?" means that Kaguya is giving Toshiya a hypnosis suggestion, the previous page is also wrong, it means: "hm? What is not right?"

Oh, now that you say it, I think I misunderstood the phrase, Let me fix it. Anyways both phrases had the same sense of inducing a hypnotic suggestion ... but the suggestion was different... I'm sorry.

The last one I wanted to translated as "Huh?What's wrong?" but I thought that it would not be understood well.

.... actually there's a lot of places you have improvised in the whole story thread, i think I can fix some if you want, not 100% correct but a bit better and closer to the story line, i'll work on it tomorrow if it's ok with you.

Ok, you can fix the story, but can you send me a private message if you find errors? I want to know the parts where I was wrong.

I still need to upload 20 pages, I hope to translate the remaining pages correctly...

Thank you >_<.

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