Nano-control version 0.10d (17th August 2018)
Hey guys! I made a game and was hoping to get some feedback on it! The art is done by our very own Aiykawa! Anyway, here's the rough background of the game:

Essentially, it'll be a sandbox-ish styled game where you have 50 days to enslave a number of girls which you improve your control over them by "training" them, which basically means using your control on them to do various stuff.

The basically flow of the game would be like:
-Find ways to indoctrinate the target
-Train the target to exert further control after indoctrination
-After the target is sufficiently trained, there would be an event that you can do to push your slave to the next level

There's essentially only the intro in the current build, mostly cause I wasted most of the time trying to fix the foundation of the game.

The final product is expected to have:
Bust portraits for all girls and main character
24 scenes(?) (4 for each girl), excluding variations
3 different endings
6 enslavable girls

But should probably note that this is an underestimation cause I don't wanna over-promise and under-deliver.

Also have a Discord set up in the event anything happens to the Patreon! Here's the invite link! www.discord.gg/T8Ud58U

17th August 2018:
Version 0.10d is now out! Have some fun stuff in it this time! and a some polls and surveys!
Download link: https://www.patreon.com/posts/20814711

As per usual, just leave me a comment either here or in the link if there are any bug and/or if you have some feedback that you think can make the game better!

If you like the game or just wanna see how it will develop in the future, do give me a follow yeah! I'm trying to keep the game free for everyone, so if you wanna support the game's art commissions, I would really appreciate it!
Might want to remove all the default RPGmaker assets before exporting a version. You can save a good amount of space by doing this.

Edit: I tried playing the game and the player crashes before it even gets to the main menu. "RGSS3 Player has stopped working"
Not sure if this is my pc or the game. Looking into it more myself.
bullet said:
Might want to remove all the default RPGmaker assets before exporting a version. You can save a good amount of space by doing this.

Edit: I tried playing the game and the player crashes before it even gets to the main menu. "RGSS3 Player has stopped working"
Not sure if this is my pc or the game. Looking into it more myself.
Probably a mix of both. RPGMaker is finicky sometimes. I've generally found that uninstalling the general use assets, and then restarting my computer, and then going online and reinstalling the general use assets tends to fix any "RGSS3 Player has stopped working" issues for a few months minimum.
bullet said:
Might want to remove all the default RPGmaker assets before exporting a version. You can save a good amount of space by doing this.

Edit: I tried playing the game and the player crashes before it even gets to the main menu. "RGSS3 Player has stopped working"
Not sure if this is my pc or the game. Looking into it more myself.
That is weird, just tried downloading it and opening it again, didn't seem to have any problems, maybe try downloading it again? If the problem persist let me know, maybe I'll upload a new link or something!
smilingdoge said:
Hey guys! I made a game and was hoping to get some feedback on it! The art is done by our very own Aiykawa! Anyway, here's the rough background of the game:

Essentially, it'll be a sandbox-ish styled game where you have 50 days to enslave a number of girls which you improve your control over them by "training" them, which basically means using your control on them to do various stuff.

The basically flow of the game would be like:
-Find ways to indoctrinate the target
-Train the target to exert further control after indoctrination
-After the target is sufficiently trained, there would be an event that you can do to push your slave to the next level

There's essentially only the intro in the current build, mostly cause I wasted most of the time trying to fix the foundation of the game.

The final product is expected to have:
Bust portraits for all girls and main character
24 scenes(?) 4 for each girl, excluding variations
3 different endings
6 enslavable girls

But should probably note that this is an underestimation cause I don't wanna over-promise and under-deliver.

Without further ado, here's the game: https://www.patreon.com/posts/15087048

Let me know on how I can improve on the game yeah!
I played a little of it before it crashed. It seems that clicking on the piano caused it I think?

Edit: All right, I've played some more and I'll give my thoughts on it okay? The game is very rough in terms of what exactly you're supposed to do. I understand that I used the control on the girl, but wasn't told to use her as means of labour. Also, the amount of control exp gained was very minimal. And when i finally got enough to upgrade, it wouldn't let me.
I still don't understand the point of the school. Will there be benefits for going to school?
What;s the point of the items you can buy? Will there be combat or something later on in the game.?

Also multiple bugs:

Clicked on piano resulted in CTD
Old guy next to mayor changes character model when talked to
Exiting the tent leads me to the other part of the forest, below the house/lab instead of outside the tent.
Tried going to class, but even when in seat, the class never started

Suggestions:
Once asked to strip, have her in that form until told not to. (Unaware that she's naked?)
If person is following, have a chance to actually comunicate with the subject. It's annoying to have to go all the way back to the house if one wants to change anything.
More desctiption on items like the stuff in the lab as other than it;s initial description, I have no idea what they do. I used one item and it did nothing as far as I could tell.
averageguy17 said:
I played a little of it before it crashed. It seems that clicking on the piano caused it I think?

Edit: All right, I've played some more and I'll give my thoughts on it okay? The game is very rough in terms of what exactly you're supposed to do. I understand that I used the control on the girl, but wasn't told to use her as means of labour. Also, the amount of control exp gained was very minimal. And when i finally got enough to upgrade, it wouldn't let me.
I still don't understand the point of the school. Will there be benefits for going to school?
What;s the point of the items you can buy? Will there be combat or something later on in the game.?

Also multiple bugs:

Clicked on piano resulted in CTD
Old guy next to mayor changes character model when talked to
Exiting the tent leads me to the other part of the forest, below the house/lab instead of outside the tent.
Tried going to class, but even when in seat, the class never started

Suggestions:
Once asked to strip, have her in that form until told not to. (Unaware that she's naked?)
If person is following, have a chance to actually comunicate with the subject. It's annoying to have to go all the way back to the house if one wants to change anything.
More desctiption on items like the stuff in the lab as other than it;s initial description, I have no idea what they do. I used one item and it did nothing as far as I could tell.
Yeap! I'll be fixing the piano bug! The old man next to the mayor, the class and also the tent! Probably forgot to save some of the changes I've made, sorry about that and thanks for finding the bugs!

Had feedback on the issue that instructions weren't very clear! So I think I'll add a pseudo tutorial kinda thing where it shows people you can use the items or stuff like that!

Been thinking of adding the communicate while they are following you, it's a planned feature, but I figured it would be better to add in more characters first! But I'll definitely add it!

As for the stay naked permanently thing, I might have a walk around town/ forest while naked thing implemented when their levels are higher! Thanks for that!

Right now Aiykawa is drawing the second character at the moment! Come and take a look if you have time!

https://picarto.tv/Aiykawa

Edit: Stream over, thanks for coming guys!
Fixed some bugs that cause crashing the game or just causing annoyance in general, so yeah! v0.01b is out!

Link: https://www.patreon.com/posts/v0-01b-update-15134886
Hey guys! Just released an update and as per usual, let me know if there are any bugs or issues yeah!
Hey guys, updated the original post with the link with the latest version of the game! Also have a sneak peek of a scene that will be in the next version of the game!

https://www.patreon.com/posts/sneak-peek-of-15806426
Hey guys! Updated the game! And have some really awesome news, the game is now backlog free among other things! Read all about it here if you are interested!: https://www.patreon.com/posts/version-0-03-is-16159075

Personally I'm pretty stroked! I also included a link to directly download the game if you all are not interested in reading the changelog and other stuff! It's all in the original post!

As per usual, let me know if there are any bugs or issues yeah!
smilingdoge said:
Hey guys! Updated the game! And have some really awesome news, the game is now backlog free among other things! Read all about it here if you are interested!: https://www.patreon.com/posts/version-0-03-is-16159075

Personally I'm pretty stroked! I also included a link to directly download the game if you all are not interested in reading the changelog and other stuff! It's all in the original post!

As per usual, let me know if there are any bugs or issues yeah!
Hey, sorry for not testing out the previous builds. I've been busy with stuff. However I tried out this new build and have already encountered two bugs. Both in the school. I skipped the intro and went went to school. After class, its now dusk I think, I went into the classroom next door and found that after talking to the teacher in there a blue dialogue box shows up but nothing in it. A harmless bug but a bug nonetheless. However, going across the hall to the bathroom, in front of the toilet there is a shiny thing. Clicking on it gives me the dialogue saying it's an empty classroom and such, and then freezes the game. I was forced to exit it and start over. I'll continue to play and update if I see anything else.
I can confirm both of averageguy17's bugs. Also, not real serious, but little sister appears briefly in the morning and then disappears.

Unrelated, but I'm apparently bad at this game: the change log says there's a place to rewatch scenes, as well as an indoctrination event for Lena, and I haven't found either of them. :-(
Well, I just tried it out. There are several problems, I've noticed. Some are minor, like the clown having frankly forced rhymes, and a weird glitch where food on the table disappears for a second when you select it before reappearing. But my biggest problem is the way that the MC originally tests the controller, on his mom.

Incest is one of the biggest turn offs out there for me, and I don't think I'm alone on that front. I'm not saying you should cut that scene from the game, I just don't think it should be required for every player, especially not so early on. Maybe instead there could be a choice about whether or not to test on her, and if you say yes, then there's a choice about what to get her to do, with a more tame option in lieu of the incest. Choices like that might contribute to what ending you get later on, too.
averageguy17 said:
Hey, sorry for not testing out the previous builds. I've been busy with stuff. However I tried out this new build and have already encountered two bugs. Both in the school. I skipped the intro and went went to school. After class, its now dusk I think, I went into the classroom next door and found that after talking to the teacher in there a blue dialogue box shows up but nothing in it. A harmless bug but a bug nonetheless. However, going across the hall to the bathroom, in front of the toilet there is a shiny thing. Clicking on it gives me the dialogue saying it's an empty classroom and such, and then freezes the game. I was forced to exit it and start over. I'll continue to play and update if I see anything else.
darsh said:
I can confirm both of averageguy17's bugs. Also, not real serious, but little sister appears briefly in the morning and then disappears.

Unrelated, but I'm apparently bad at this game: the change log says there's a place to rewatch scenes, as well as an indoctrination event for Lena, and I haven't found either of them. :-(
Sorry about the bug, found the problem and I'll be fixing and releasing an update with the bugs fixed!

Nadie said:
Well, I just tried it out. There are several problems, I've noticed. Some are minor, like the clown having frankly forced rhymes, and a weird glitch where food on the table disappears for a second when you select it before reappearing. But my biggest problem is the way that the MC originally tests the controller, on his mom.

Incest is one of the biggest turn offs out there for me, and I don't think I'm alone on that front. I'm not saying you should cut that scene from the game, I just don't think it should be required for every player, especially not so early on. Maybe instead there could be a choice about whether or not to test on her, and if you say yes, then there's a choice about what to get her to do, with a more tame option in lieu of the incest. Choices like that might contribute to what ending you get later on, too.
Yeah, did the rhyming thing on a whim and now I'm in too deep to pull out, haha.
On a serious note, I get where you are coming from, I'll probably release a version without those issues in the future! Currently have more pressing matters to work on like the final two characters, but I want you to know I'll seriously think through your feedback
bug list:
- I cannot talk with Reka (the sister) at night in her room.
- in Kay's house, the wall separate the kitchen and the rest of the screen can be walked on => the character walk out of the frame
issue:
- i cannot find the ways to indoctrinate 2 new characters, need walk through asap
laststand0810 said:
bug list:
- I cannot talk with Reka (the sister) at night in her room.
- in Kay's house, the wall separate the kitchen and the rest of the screen can be walked on => the character walk out of the frame
issue:
- i cannot find the ways to indoctrinate 2 new characters, need walk through asap
Thanks for the bug report man, I get on it right away! I had a post made with all the bugs found in the current build compiled here! I'm fixing the bugs now and I should have a bug free version released by the end of this week!

https://www.patreon.com/posts/16202187

Just let me know here if there are any bugs or issues that are not in the list and I'll have it in there and try to get it fixed soon!
smilingdoge said:
[...] I'm fixing the bugs now and I should have a bug free version released by the end of this week! [...]
Liar! It's a universal LAW that video games can never be completely bug-free.
Anon_3.141 said:
Liar! It's a universal LAW that video games can never be completely bug-free.
Shhhhh, they don't know that.

On a serious-ish note, I just released a update/bugfix release for the game! You can see the change log as well as the download link here!
https://www.patreon.com/posts/v0-03b-update-is-16254114

Also added a poll to decide how Elaine's alternate outfit will look like! Come cast a vote for it here if you want!
https://www.patreon.com/posts/16255098
smilingdoge said:
Shhhhh, they don't know that.

On a serious-ish note, I just released a update/bugfix release for the game! You can see the change log as well as the download link here!
https://www.patreon.com/posts/v0-03b-update-is-16254114

Also added a poll to decide how Elaine's alternate outfit will look like! Come cast a vote for it here if you want!
https://www.patreon.com/posts/16255098
I like the Skimpy Outfit option.
I still have no idea on how to indoctrinate the sister and the milf, anyone have any idea?
laststand0810 said:
I still have no idea on how to indoctrinate the sister and the milf, anyone have any idea?
The sister isn't available yet! But both the milfs should be, I have a walk through link in my home page that shows who's available and who's not!

Here you go: https://www.patreon.com/posts/walkthrough-for-15663236
Hey guys! Have a new version ready and I updated the original post with the new download link!
There's a bit of quality of life improvements in this version so hopefully you all will like it!

Just let me know if you all find any bugs or if you have any feedback yeah!
Hey guys, got a new version of the game out for both Windows and Android out! The changelog and download links can be found here! And I updated the OP accordingly!
https://www.patreon.com/posts/v0-5c-public-out-17468581

Also got a discord server set up so that in the event I get purged by Patreon for whatever reason, I can still update you guys on the status of the game and what not! Here's the invite to the server: www.discord.gg/T8Ud58U
I got Elaine's new outfit and tried to make her wear it, but it just shows her getting naked, then she's back in the same outfit. Nothing I do actually makes the outfit change.

Edit: The outfit does change, but only when I release the control, go back to her, and try to control her again. If I talk to her normally it shows her regular outfit and suddenly changes if I choose the control option. And it swaps back to regular if I choose for her to follow me.
blooper said:
I got Elaine's new outfit and tried to make her wear it, but it just shows her getting naked, then she's back in the same outfit. Nothing I do actually makes the outfit change.

Edit: The outfit does change, but only when I release the control, go back to her, and try to control her again. If I talk to her normally it shows her regular outfit and suddenly changes if I choose the control option. And it swaps back to regular if I choose for her to follow me.
I see, thanks for letting me know! I'll put it in the bug list and fix it when I get the chance!
Hey guys, v0.6 will be released to everyone by the end of this week! We have some new scenes as well as a questlog implemented in the game! In the mean time we have a poll set up to answer the age old question: "Best girl who?" Give your vote and read up on what else in gonna be in the next version here! https://www.patreon.com/posts/weekly-update-on-17920326
V0.6c is now out! I updated the OP with the relevant information. You can also download it here! https://www.patreon.com/posts/v0-6c-public-is-18028695
smilingdoge said:
V0.6c is now out! I updated the OP with the relevant information. You can also download it here! https://www.patreon.com/posts/v0-6c-public-is-18028695
So I tested out the v0.6 version, and while I'm happy to say I didn't find any bugs so far, it's still a grind to make progress.

Also, has the garden plotline been added yet? I keep talking to the guy who says people keep sneaking into the garden at night, but I can't seem to trigger anything?

Suggestions:

I think that maybe the girls' sexual events/level ups should be worth more exp as you unlock them. Like strip tease will be 10 exp but have blowjobs be worth 15 or so each time you do it. I found that there's no incentive to keep doing the sexual ones, as the working a job gave me the benefit of earning money.

Also, the money you earn is really pitiful, especially going further into the game where you have to buy costumes. Assuming there's going to be more than one costume, it's going to be real grindy just to get them, Maybe either have each individual girl be worth more as they work in the store. Like sister gets same amount as you do, Mom makes like 10 more than you, Friend makes less than you, as hinted by the shopkeep's line of "be careful" and neighbour milf makes like 15 more than you as she's more experienced than you at the job at the shop.
The wages could get different when working at the town hall.
or Have their wages increase as their level goes up. Like level 0 is what we make now, but as they reach level 1 or 2, the amount they make increases.

Or maybe the idea of when you level up your slaves, they're enslaved enough that they can work on their own. You have slaves, why should you work to do money when you should have them do all the work for you. How about striking a deal with the costume guy (as he's the only one who knows about your personality) and have your slaves work in his shop to earn money for you?

Also, will we get the ability to upgrade the controller so that we can have more than one slave in our party? If we do, some slave banter would be pretty cool. Like have events happen when you have a certain 2 or more slaves with you? (The mother/daughter combo was a pretty good start.)

Also, will there be alternate ways of enslaving them? Or will I always have to get mom to enslave sis for me and stuff?

I have more, but this post is long enough as is, so I'll think about it more.
averageguy17 said:
So I tested out the v0.6 version, and while I'm happy to say I didn't find any bugs so far, it's still a grind to make progress.

Also, has the garden plotline been added yet? I keep talking to the guy who says people keep sneaking into the garden at night, but I can't seem to trigger anything?

Suggestions:

I think that maybe the girls' sexual events/level ups should be worth more exp as you unlock them. Like strip tease will be 10 exp but have blowjobs be worth 15 or so each time you do it. I found that there's no incentive to keep doing the sexual ones, as the working a job gave me the benefit of earning money.

Also, the money you earn is really pitiful, especially going further into the game where you have to buy costumes. Assuming there's going to be more than one costume, it's going to be real grindy just to get them, Maybe either have each individual girl be worth more as they work in the store. Like sister gets same amount as you do, Mom makes like 10 more than you, Friend makes less than you, as hinted by the shopkeep's line of "be careful" and neighbour milf makes like 15 more than you as she's more experienced than you at the job at the shop.
The wages could get different when working at the town hall.
or Have their wages increase as their level goes up. Like level 0 is what we make now, but as they reach level 1 or 2, the amount they make increases.

Or maybe the idea of when you level up your slaves, they're enslaved enough that they can work on their own. You have slaves, why should you work to do money when you should have them do all the work for you. How about striking a deal with the costume guy (as he's the only one who knows about your personality) and have your slaves work in his shop to earn money for you?

Also, will we get the ability to upgrade the controller so that we can have more than one slave in our party? If we do, some slave banter would be pretty cool. Like have events happen when you have a certain 2 or more slaves with you? (The mother/daughter combo was a pretty good start.)

Also, will there be alternate ways of enslaving them? Or will I always have to get mom to enslave sis for me and stuff?

I have more, but this post is long enough as is, so I'll think about it more.
Thanks a lot for the feedback and suggestions man! I'll try to address the questions and suggestions you have one by one!

1)The garden quest line isn't added yet I'm afraid, I'm currently focusing on getting all the main girls out first! But it'll be added very soon after that!

2)Think I might have misunderstood your question, are you suggesting that the current amount needs to increase? Currently the exp gained are as follows:
Strip - 10exp
BJ - 15 exp
Vaginal -25 exp

3)I'm currently working on revamping the whole income system, but be awhile before it comes out, but it should improve the whole getting enough money for the game thing!

4)The whole making them work for you independently thing really interests me, I'll see if I can find a way for it to make sense in the story, cause I don't really want an incident where "Oh, she's working in this place for some reason instead of doing her usual stuff, and we don't see she spend the money for some reason."
Might be me being difficult, but I don't want some events that don't quite make sense in the story, and I want as few miracle exemptions in the game as possible, unless it's for comedic effect haha.

5)I'm thinking of doing this in the future haha, but seems a bit difficult to implement. So I guess we'll see how it goes haha.

If you have more suggestions, I'll be glad to hear them!
smilingdoge said:
Thanks a lot for the feedback and suggestions man! I'll try to address the questions and suggestions you have one by one!

1)The garden quest line isn't added yet I'm afraid, I'm currently focusing on getting all the main girls out first! But it'll be added very soon after that!

2)Think I might have misunderstood your question, are you suggesting that the current amount needs to increase? Currently the exp gained are as follows:
Strip - 10exp
BJ - 15 exp
Vaginal -25 exp

3)I'm currently working on revamping the whole income system, but be awhile before it comes out, but it should improve the whole getting enough money for the game thing!

4)The whole making them work for you independently thing really interests me, I'll see if I can find a way for it to make sense in the story, cause I don't really want an incident where "Oh, she's working in this place for some reason instead of doing her usual stuff, and we don't see she spend the money for some reason."
Might be me being difficult, but I don't want some events that don't quite make sense in the story, and I want as few miracle exemptions in the game as possible, unless it's for comedic effect haha.

5)I'm thinking of doing this in the future haha, but seems a bit difficult to implement. So I guess we'll see how it goes haha.

If you have more suggestions, I'll be glad to hear them!
Ah, it seems I was wrong about the experience thing, sorry! My bad.

Also, maybe in order for the whole working independently thing, maybe you could only do it during a certain time of the day, or maybe after you get an upgrade to the controller to control 2 people. For example, Kay, is in the house in the afternoon everyday. Only during this time, can you send her to work for you and earn money, while you go level someone else up.

I'lll try to think of other suggestions.
Hey guys! v0.7e is now available for public download! I've updated the OP with the relevant links! You can also download it here! https://www.patreon.com/posts/v0-7e-out-for-18756201

I'm currently getting some animation commissioned for the game, if you happen to ave a buck to spare it would help out the game a lot!

On another note! There's a poll going on that would affect the future of the game, if you happen to have the time, do give it a vote! https://www.patreon.com/posts/add-ons-to-focus-18756483