HypnoHub - DreamWeavers | Should this become a VN?

BoredWriter

01/30/24 11:30AM

DreamWeavers | Should this become a VN?

I'm a bored bitchy writer, so have a thing I wrote, because I have no life.

This took me somewhere around 1.5 hours to write.
No specific characters. I just picked random names outta my ass.

Also, if this is actually well received, then I'll probably do/share more.

I'll update the thread title anytime I add another. The addition will be the sub's name

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www.wattpad.com/story/361681468-it%27s-just-a-bar-right
dreamweavers.lunakiri.com
toyhou.se/~literature/221637.its-just-a-bar-right <-- TH account required!

BoredWriter

02/02/24 05:33AM

www.wattpad.com/1419406526-it%27s-just-a-bar-right-stacy

Amy got a new subject.

BoredWriter

02/02/24 05:34AM

Also, I need a cover for it. Gimme prices, people.

Hypnorgasm

02/15/24 10:18AM

I've just read the first chapter. It's pretty good for 1.5 hours of writing! I noticed, though, that somehow the paragraphs around the phrase "You were a bitch in highschool, Rose, but now you're my bitch." got duplicated, so they're in there 5 times. Not sure how that happened. There's some other duplicated parts too, like the paragraph starting with "But now, you're all mine."

The increasing duplications as the story went on actually started to get surreal, as if the memory-altering powers of Amy were working on the reader too.

jigiyak

02/15/24 11:46AM

Hypnorgasm said:
The increasing duplications as the story went on actually started to get surreal, as if the memory-altering powers of Amy were working on the reader too.

hey it's not a bug it's a feature

BoredWriter

02/15/24 08:21PM

Hypnorgasm said:
I've just read the first chapter. It's pretty good for 1.5 hours of writing! I noticed, though, that somehow the paragraphs around the phrase "You were a bitch in highschool, Rose, but now you're my bitch." got duplicated, so they're in there 5 times. Not sure how that happened. There's some other duplicated parts too, like the paragraph starting with "But now, you're all mine."

The increasing duplications as the story went on actually started to get surreal, as if the memory-altering powers of Amy were working on the reader too.

... can I claim that was intentional and NOT my copy+pasting into wattpad beinfg dumb, and have it be believed?

Also, I thought I managed to edit it all out, dammit.

BoredWriter

02/15/24 08:27PM

Also, I may very well be open to ideas for future 'chapters' with Amy. I've only done the two so far because I just don't really have any ideas, and I worry about it being the same thing, just differnt character or whatever. At least I think I managed to make Rose + Stacy a little different, or at least different enough.

So... yeah. I may be open to suggestions, for both situations and for characters - although Amy is always a dom, and that isn't changing.

Adorable design!

BoredWriter

02/25/24 12:25AM

Auri said:

BoredWriter said:
Amy has a design now~
f2.toyhou.se/file/f2-toyh...T1x18ovVOB.png?1708815497

Adorable design!

... was aiming more for sexy and alluring, but not slutty. oops.

BoredWriter

02/25/24 01:48AM

twitter.com/Encrae/status/1761549657157542259

Rose, before and after Amy acquires her.

Lunakiri

02/25/24 03:25AM

x.com/Encrae/status/1761577908093571273?s=20

Stacy, before and after!