BoredWriter
01/30/24 11:30AM
It's Just a Bar.... Right?
I'm a bored bitchy writer, so have a thing I wrote, because I have no life.

This took me somewhere around 1.5 hours to write.
No specific characters. I just picked random names outta my ass.

Also, if this is actually well received, then I'll probably do/share more.

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www.wattpad.com/story/361681468-it%27s-just-a-bar-right
BoredWriter
02/02/24 05:33AM
BoredWriter
02/02/24 05:34AM
Also, I need a cover for it. Gimme prices, people.
Hypnorgasm
02/15/24 10:18AM
I've just read the first chapter. It's pretty good for 1.5 hours of writing! I noticed, though, that somehow the paragraphs around the phrase "You were a bitch in highschool, Rose, but now you're my bitch." got duplicated, so they're in there 5 times. Not sure how that happened. There's some other duplicated parts too, like the paragraph starting with "But now, you're all mine."

The increasing duplications as the story went on actually started to get surreal, as if the memory-altering powers of Amy were working on the reader too.
jigiyak
02/15/24 11:46AM
Hypnorgasm said:
The increasing duplications as the story went on actually started to get surreal, as if the memory-altering powers of Amy were working on the reader too.


hey it's not a bug it's a feature
BoredWriter
02/15/24 08:21PM
Hypnorgasm said:
I've just read the first chapter. It's pretty good for 1.5 hours of writing! I noticed, though, that somehow the paragraphs around the phrase "You were a bitch in highschool, Rose, but now you're my bitch." got duplicated, so they're in there 5 times. Not sure how that happened. There's some other duplicated parts too, like the paragraph starting with "But now, you're all mine."

The increasing duplications as the story went on actually started to get surreal, as if the memory-altering powers of Amy were working on the reader too.


... can I claim that was intentional and NOT my copy+pasting into wattpad beinfg dumb, and have it be believed?

Also, I thought I managed to edit it all out, dammit.
BoredWriter
02/15/24 08:27PM
Also, I may very well be open to ideas for future 'chapters' with Amy. I've only done the two so far because I just don't really have any ideas, and I worry about it being the same thing, just differnt character or whatever. At least I think I managed to make Rose + Stacy a little different, or at least different enough.

So... yeah. I may be open to suggestions, for both situations and for characters - although Amy is always a dom, and that isn't changing.
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