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DarkVenom
>> #104532
Posted on 2016-05-17 23:40:34
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Decided to try our 'Kaa eyes' instead of the usual spiral eyes. Not sure about it myself but i think it still works.
Yukikyun
>> #104534
Posted on 2016-05-17 23:53:16
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Thank you, this site needs more Yami-sama <3
HypnoMangaEditor
>> #104542
Posted on 2016-05-18 00:30:58
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There are 2 features your Kaa eyes are lacking. One is that Kaa eyes don't all have the same form and shape for each different color used in the eyes. The size of each part of color used is pretty much different. The other is the lack of green color. You only used yellow and a light and a darker blue.
DarkVenom
>> #104548
Posted on 2016-05-18 01:04:16
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HypnoMangaEditor said:
There are 2 features your Kaa eyes are lacking. One is that Kaa eyes don't all have the same form and shape for each different color used in the eyes. The size of each part of color used is pretty much different. The other is the lack of green color. You only used yellow and a light and a darker blue.


Fair enough. Wasn't sure on the exact features when doing it, and i probably should has saved the original file to edit with. Hopefully my next kaa eyes with be more like kaa eyes. Cheers for the advice :)
greasyi
>> #104626
Posted on 2016-05-18 07:47:50
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I actually don't mind doing whatever for the kaa styling itself, I think they look great. My only feedback is how they fit into the image:
* The color grading is off. There's no shadows and the colors are very bold compared to e.g. her hair, which gives the impression that her eyes are glowing. But then her face isn't lit up around the edges of her irises, so they're clearly not glowing, and my brain can't reconcile this and says "manip" instead of "sexy hypnosis".
* There's no perspective on them. This isn't a problem for the left eye, but the angle on the right eye is such that it really ought to be a little oblong. Actually, your current profile pic is a good example of the same problem.
Cradily
>> #104648
Posted on 2016-05-18 10:06:10
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DarkVenom said:
Decided to try our 'Kaa eyes' instead of the usual spiral eyes. Not sure about it myself but i think it still works.


Nice to see that you are experimenting with different eyes =D It looks like you're mostly just replacing the spiral image in the background with something else, though.

Since you've made a few manips already my advice is to start experimenting with the tools/options/effects, so you can do stuff like what greasyi mentioned to make it fit better into the image.
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