blue_eyes bottomless breasts caption caption_only collar dog_girl fake_tail femsub large_breasts leash maid_headdress maledom manip pet_play rak_(manipper) sakuya_izayoi silver_hair text touhou twintails

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rexhn
>> #208361
Posted on 2017-10-30 21:53:52
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Try #2. Please give suggestions about what I did well, and what I still fucked up. Also all I have is ms paint, is there any way of doing the eyes, either swirl or glow, with paint? And also how do I tag myself as the guy who made this, in case I do more? Anyway hope you all enjoy, I did my best to incorporate the feedback.

AngelGrace
>> #208366
Posted on 2017-10-30 22:17:17
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rexhn said:
Try #2. Please give suggestions about what I did well, and what I still fucked up. Also all I have is ms paint, is there any way of doing the eyes, either swirl or glow, with paint? And also how do I tag myself as the guy who made this, in case I do more? Anyway hope you all enjoy, I did my best to incorporate the feedback.


GIMP is free and fairly easy to use, and I think Paint 3D has some of those features, as well.

Blastman
>> #208368
Posted on 2017-10-30 22:19:11
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rexhn said:
is there any way of doing the eyes, either swirl or glow, with paint?


As someone who has used MS Paint before, I haven't seen any way besides simply drawing over it, which probably wouldn't look too good.

HypnoMangaEditor
>> #208369
Posted on 2017-10-30 22:28:00
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Well it's a lot better. I normally don't give "suggestions" what you did well, I am looking at pictures and can tell you what you can improve.

- You chose an easy to read font, but it's a bit generic. Wild Words or Anime Ace 2.0 are often used by lots of typesetters when they translate Mangas on the Web. It's easy to read and doesn't look boring. Also, I nearly always center my font, because aligning it to one side of the other doesn't sit right with me.

- There's a bit too much open space on the left of the picture, you could move the girl a bit over and cut the picture size by a couple of pixels.

- Grammar: You can check if your text has errors on the web. I use www.reverso.net/spell-checker/english-spelling-grammar/ - You've got a couple of mistakes in there.

As for the picture itself ... I don't know. The base picture is good, but I find the visualization of the mc/trance act a bit lackluster. Since it is a drug, you might want to maybe edit her eyes a bit to show that she is not herself.

Oh and as someone new - don't base how good your picture is on the amounts of score you get. It's a completely useless system in that regard and you shouldn't ever use it to measure your work. In the end, it comes down to how satisfied you are with your work. :)

People already told you about Gimp - It's more than powerful enough for the first couple of years until you want to do advanced stuff like complete vids.

rexhn said:
And also how do I tag myself as the guy who made this, in case I do more?

Yes. I'll add it for you.

Whisper
>> #208375
Posted on 2017-10-30 22:52:30
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Also if you want advice you can dm me or add me on discord for text help and manip ideas
I kinda wanna make a discord server for Manipper

I made a few manip of my owns and with the help of Frombeyond and we did good together (I hope)

Poketizer
>> #208388
Posted on 2017-10-31 00:08:42
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rexhn said:
Try #2. Please give suggestions about what I did well, and what I still fucked up. Also all I have is ms paint, is there any way of doing the eyes, either swirl or glow, with paint? And also how do I tag myself as the guy who made this, in case I do more? Anyway hope you all enjoy, I did my best to incorporate the feedback.


you could also use Gimp 2 or Paint.net, both are good and free programms.
you should also always check your grammar, I haven't at the beginning...
I already forgot how to make new character and artist tags, but you can always look it up on the faq or beginners guide.

you should also tag your images before uploading, don't worry you will get the hang of it.



Miss_Phillicia
>> #208482
Posted on 2017-10-31 07:36:39
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Minor spelling errors, like the glaring "her" instead of "he," but otherwise the only flaws are a matter of preference and opinion.

EDIT and by lack of flaws, I don't mean perfect and my number 1 favorite ever. I just mean it meets the manipp standard. Still in my favorites though, always liked petplay.

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