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tulpacuckingishot69
>> #242429
Posted on 2018-03-26 14:59:43
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This is my first manip, any suggestions or critique are welcome.
Joybug
>> #242432
Posted on 2018-03-26 15:34:12
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Don't make the text blend in with the background.
EdenSnake
>> #242437
Posted on 2018-03-26 16:09:18
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tulpacuckingishot69 said:
This is my first manip, any suggestions or critique are welcome.


Less words more big and readable, but it's your first try and it is very good <3

I like it, wonderful work <3
Jabberwocky
>> #242440
Posted on 2018-03-26 16:52:50
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Joybug said:
Don't make the text blend in with the background.


It doesn’t
dark_phoenix
>> #242458
Posted on 2018-03-26 20:11:57
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Story was long, but very satisfying. If possible, you might want to outline the yellow text in black to make it more readable, probably shorten it as well.
tulpacuckingishot69
>> #242492
Posted on 2018-03-26 23:16:10
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thanks for the feedback guys, really glad you enjoyed it, ill make sure to pick better text colors and try not to make one this long next time :P

should i make a "sequel" to this manip?
rileyserves
>> #242497
Posted on 2018-03-26 23:43:34
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I actually REALLY like the longer manips so its nice to see them. This was something I enjoyed outside of text readability.. And yes please make a sequel
Hypno-man
>> #242517
Posted on 2018-03-27 01:33:28
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good story, Seems like you got all the basics of a good manip down just next time the words should definitely be more legible with the background.
Chibideath
>> #242579
Posted on 2018-03-27 06:33:10
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Yeah, the only issue I had was how blinding the yellow looked to me. Rest was fine.
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