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Hawkeye
>> #274163
Posted on 2018-08-08 20:40:38
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Hey, so, I've been working on my OC for a while now, and I think the progress on the character sheet has reached the point where I'd like to share it with the hub for feedback!

Special thanks to Morris1611 for his great work!

Presenting Queen Lindabelle!

She's the Goddess-Queen of the Kingdom of Luria, and an expert at the art of mind control. She's infatuated with the concept of female submission, and loves turning the women of her kingdom into her adorable playthings. But beneath the powerful and elegant exterior, she's a complete submissive masochist, and her favorite use of her powers is to manipulate her people into helping her play out her degrading and submissive fantasies.

I'm eager to hear feedback. It's just about done, I just want to do a few more changes (like coloring in the chains on her dress), and I'm really impressed with how well it's turned out so far, though there are a few issues.

Do you guys think the hawk symbol should be a bit bigger and more detailed? Zooming in it seems a bit silly and dinky for what's supposed to be the crest of her royal house.

DarkMask
>> #274173
Posted on 2018-08-08 22:35:57
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She looks pretty cool. I really like her hair colors and the design of her dress.

The only thing I'm unsure of are the chains. The random chains on her dress feel redundant. It would be better to incorporate chains in a different way, maybe wrapped around her somehow. Also it looks a little weird her keeping the chain attached to her neck under her dress. Maybe she could keep the chain separate but keep the collar?

I think the hawk logo is fine. It's meant to be a simple tattoo of her house right? So it shouldn't stand out unless you want it to. If you are uneasy about it you could try it in different locations.

All in all I think she is very well designed. It's nice to see another "Royalty" themed OC on the Hub. Maybe she can meet Princess Caelia in the future?

skullman2033
>> #274177
Posted on 2018-08-08 22:49:24
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She seems like pleasant company

Hawkeye
>> #274178
Posted on 2018-08-08 22:59:39
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DarkMask said:
She looks pretty cool. I really like her hair colors and the design of her dress.


Thanks!

DarkMask said:
The only thing I'm unsure of are the chains. The random chains on her dress feel redundant. It would be better to incorporate chains in a different way, maybe wrapped around her somehow. Also it looks a little weird her keeping the chain attached to her neck under her dress. Maybe she could keep the chain separate but keep the collar?


The idea is that since she's a queen who's secretly a submissive masochist, I tried to incorporate a fancy slave collar into her royal outfit in such a way that the collar and leash seem to serve another fashion purpose. I considered wrapping the chain around her, but if you'll notice the "handles" near the top of the dress, the dress is designed to also be easily torn apart when she's in the mood for that, and wrapping it around her would cause the chains to get in the way.

DarkMask said:

I think the hawk logo is fine. It's meant to be a simple tattoo of her house right? So it shouldn't stand out unless you want it to. If you are uneasy about it you could try it in different locations.


My main issue with it is that at its current size, it's not big enough to be detailed and looks kind of scrawl-y. I'm thinking I might make it a bit bigger so that a bit more detail can be put into it.

DarkMask said:
All in all I think she is very well designed. It's nice to see another "Royalty" themed OC on the Hub. Maybe she can meet Princess Caelia in the future?


That would indeed be fun. I've got a bunch of ideas for what to do with Lindabelle, and once I do a few pics with her just doing her thing, I'd love to have her interact with the other OCs.




Imasuky
>> #274209
Posted on 2018-08-09 01:43:40
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Can't wait to see her adventures

pokemongirl
>> #274226
Posted on 2018-08-09 02:41:19
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ooooh I really like her @.@

Hawkeye
>> #274243
Posted on 2018-08-09 03:58:48
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pokemongirl said:
ooooh I really like her @.@


Always great to have your approval, pokemongirl!

Any thoughts on her house insignia / crotch tattoo? Does it look too much like doesn't-match-the-drapes pubic hair when she's in panties?

pokemongirl
>> #274258
Posted on 2018-08-09 04:31:27
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Hawkeye said:
Always great to have your approval, pokemongirl!

Any thoughts on her house insignia / crotch tattoo? Does it look too much like doesn't-match-the-drapes pubic hair when she's in panties?


Awww shucks *blushes*

Well I'm biased but brands and stuff like that is always such a turn on. But ah I do see what you mean I suppose you could make it smaller to avoid that but up to you there. Unless you want to use it as a tramp stamp or branding on her behind as well all sound so hot and are turning me on thinking about it *blushes*

Hawkeye
>> #274261
Posted on 2018-08-09 04:34:16
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pokemongirl said:
Awww shucks *blushes*

Well I'm biased but brands and stuff like that is always such a turn on. But ah I do see what you mean I suppose you could make it smaller to avoid that but up to you there. Unless you want to use it as a tramp stamp or branding on her behind as well all sound so hot and are turning me on thinking about it *blushes*


Ah, a tramp stamp would be lovely, but look at her hair! When would we ever see it? :(

VanillaHypnotist
>> #274320
Posted on 2018-08-09 15:44:34
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I could be wrong but I believe when a woman has a symbol or tattoo at her pelvis region or within it, it's called a 'Vag Badge'. That is, if what I've heard the slang term for it is correct.

Either way, this OC looks good and she sounds wonderful. I'm looking forward to seeing more artwork of her. :)

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