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scp-682
>> #16087
Posted on 2014-04-24 22:46:49
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Nice...though he should have wished for mark to turn, saving a wish, if there's a limit...
Mindwipe
>> #16124
Posted on 2014-04-25 05:11:52
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This is an example of tags failing when it comes to text manips. In the manip, this is transgender, but the character in the pic is always female. She's also a personified ship, hence the "personification" tag, but again, that's nowhere in the text.

Given that the pic has absolutely nothing to do with the text, I think you could've picked any original female character, and then you could've avoided people who actually know the character being unable to enjoy your story. A better plan, though, would be to write for pics that lend themselves better to hypnosis manips, rather than just random pinups.
ComputerScience
>> #16128
Posted on 2014-04-25 06:40:30
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I dont know Mindwipe, Im pretty happy with all my decisions, including my choice of image, and tags.

And thank you scp-682 for the compliment as well as anyone who is responsible for the score of this image going up. Its that kind of feedback that makes all the difference to me.
megaurelius
>> #16197
Posted on 2014-04-25 20:26:42
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So you're only interested in positive feedback? Great way to improve
Mindwipe
>> #16223
Posted on 2014-04-26 02:33:43
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ComputerScience said:
I dont know Mindwipe, Im pretty happy with all my decisions, including my choice of image, and tags.

And thank you scp-682 for the compliment as well as anyone who is responsible for the score of this image going up. Its that kind of feedback that makes all the difference to me.


First of all, I wasn't saying anything about how you tagged (though you did leave off a tag for yourself as manipper), I was saying that the tags kind of fail to make sense on this manip due to the nature of the manip. It's the downside of tagging things in text.

Second of all, don't simply dismiss criticism. I mean, don't you think this kind of manip would be even better if the pic actually lent itself more to the story? This is, after all, an image site. The images should get most of the consideration, imo. There's nothing wrong with caption only manips, but the best ones take pics that already look like they were made for a hypnosis story, or otherwise come up with clever ways to write a hypnosis story around the pic. In other words, I think the best text manips are written for a specific pic, and can't have any other randomly-chosen pic substituted in.
greasyi
>> #16227
Posted on 2014-04-26 03:57:06
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The alternative to tagging things in text is not tagging things in text, which causes even more problems. :\
WhirlwindDervish
>> #38791
Posted on 2014-12-16 10:00:31
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I love this manip style. Could be the font, maybe the TG...hmm.
Either way, it's amazah and I would like more. *calmly drops coffee mug on the floor*
Shmecha
>> #47846
Posted on 2015-02-27 05:09:44
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I'm in the same line of thinking with Eric.
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