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absurdres blonde_hair coin etlabsotwe female_only femsub orange_hair original pendulum short_hair sitting skirt sleeping white_background

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Amentibus
>> #26809
Posted on 2014-08-28 11:39:02
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it is the first one i do, what do you think about it?

i used this as a model btw
hypnohub.net/post/show/18...b-minori_misato-saimin_en

Mister Vi
>> #26812
Posted on 2014-08-28 12:17:44
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it's quite cute I like it :)

DunkelSpiral
>> #26813
Posted on 2014-08-28 12:19:31
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Well full disclosure, I like this style, the lines, the shadows, and the pose. However, I don´t like that her eyes are hidden, hypno being what it is, her eyes would have probably been lovely to see.

As a first, undeniably great and I look forward to moar.

Amentibus
>> #26815
Posted on 2014-08-28 13:11:39
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DunkelSpiral said:
I don´t like that her eyes are hidden, hypno being what it is, her eyes would have probably been lovely to see.


You want the eyes to be closed or half closed? I can do that tomorrow

CJO1234
>> #26817
Posted on 2014-08-28 13:17:45
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Amentibus said:
You want the eyes to be closed or half closed? I can do that tomorrow

Personally, I'd like to see them half-closed and empty, if you don't mind of course.

Cradily
>> #26818
Posted on 2014-08-28 13:20:44
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Amentibus said:
You want the eyes to be closed or half closed? I can do that tomorrow


I think half-closed eyes work better for this image since pendulums are mostly about making a subject relaxed and sleepy. On another note, I like how you draw =D

Yugan
>> #26819
Posted on 2014-08-28 13:36:52
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Very good, I thnik I gonna love your work.^^

eshie
>> #26820
Posted on 2014-08-28 14:14:22
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I like the head dropped sleeping look, it's so cute. It's like I can almost hear her soft breathing as she goes deep. Good work!

Roxa
>> #26823
Posted on 2014-08-28 14:48:26
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Nice work. Keep going like this.

PomPom
>> #26825
Posted on 2014-08-28 15:19:16
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I think the character is cute. Hopefilly you plan on using her again!


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