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Posted: 2015-02-16 06:36:06
by masd23 - Size: 800x600
- Source: exhentai.org/s/9041825745/754869-17
- Rating: Explicit
- Score: 68 (vote up)
>> #46320
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First, I really don't like spiral eyes.
Second, I am getting less and less confident with the texts I write.
Leaving that aside, as always, all feedbacks are welcome (Also I didn't tagged this as loli because suou doesn't seems like a loli in this picture, or, at least, for she doesn't. If it is wrong, I will fix it asap.)
>> #46326
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You don't like how spiral eyes look, or don't like making spiral eyes? =O
For the text, I'm pretty sure you can ask on the forums somewhere for somebody to proofread the text for you before you upload. In this case the only problem I see is 'Then, you will (be) pleasuring me', and if you're being picky you could capitalize the name 'Suou-chan'.
>> #46328
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>> #46334
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You don't like how spiral eyes look, or don't like making spiral eyes? =O
Mostly the second one because it takes me a lot of effort to make them look in a ways that let's me happy.
For the text, I'm pretty sure you can ask on the forums somewhere for somebody to proofread the text for you before you upload. In this case the only problem I see is 'Then, you will (be) pleasuring me', and if you're being picky you could capitalize the name 'Suou-chan'.
I suppose I will have to do that since I am also finding errors like that in my others manips.
Authentic translation errors going on here.
Yeah, I thought my English was good enough to do this but it seems like I was wrong.
>> #46337
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Yeah, I thought my English was good enough to do this but it seems like I was wrong.
Your English is fine. The most important thing is that you were understood. It's the grammar that is flawed, and that takes much more time to get right. There seem to be plenty of people able to help. If you used them to your advantage then these would go perfectly
>> #46348
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>> #46374
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Your English is fine. The most important thing is that you were understood. It's the grammar that is flawed, and that takes much more time to get right. There seem to be plenty of people able to help. If you used them to your advantage then these would go perfectly
Thanks, that makes me feel a little better with myself.
Th-those aren't her friends...she...never met them *huddles alone in the "cares about canon" corner*
Well, they aren't her friends but she does met kiko in the series.
>> #46433
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Th-those aren't her friends...she...never met them *huddles alone in the "cares about canon" corner*
It doesn't matter, because Gemini of the Meteor was terrible anyway.
The only good thing to come out of that season was Suou. <3
>> #46530
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It doesn't matter, because Gemini of the Meteor was terrible anyway.
The only good thing to come out of that season was Suou. <3
the music was awesome though
>> #46532
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the music was awesome though
You got me there. I remember liking the music.