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Posted: 2015-05-26 08:32:13
by Cradily - Size: 867x1227
- Source: www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium
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Rushed it a bit. Is the text too hard to see/anything I should fix?
Love your writing as always. I didn't have any trouble following it. I'd comment on the text colors maybe needing to contrast a bit more, but that might just be due to my partial color blindness. Either way, love it as is.
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text colors maybe needing to contrast a bit more, but that might just be due to my partial color blindness. Either way, love it as is.
Ah, okay. I'll try to use make the colors more vivid next time. (No promises though, I'm a fan of soft colors.) Or just make it easier to differentiate who is speaking, since it doesn't really follow any structure here.
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This is a really clever idea! And I like the pushy subject there :P