Overall it's a great image. If I had to nitpick, looking how bright her skin is in correlation that the sun is coming from a certain direction, I think her hair is too dark and should overall be a little brighter. Also, the Fishcakes in the Bag are a little bit on the small side.
I also thought her upper leg area was a little bit to bulky, compared to other images. Not by a huge margin, but still recognizable.
There's also still the issue that all the character's faces you draw basically look the same, but I guess that is something hard to overcome and can be called "personal style". It's less recognizeable in the Yami picture, but it's still there.
What I like is that you actually made part of the grass background different (not a plain green field) but then stopped by making the trees just plain brown blocks. A bit more texture here, maybe a flower on the grass, a bee or a butterfly - a cat chasing it maybe (so not always in the same position, but you can see it running through the whole picture) ? Little details bring an image to life.