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Posted: 2018-08-26 03:25:06
by TobiKohai - Size: 1800x1280
- Source: rule34.paheal.net:81/post...44#search=ahri%20ricegnat
- Rating: Explicit
- Score: 154 (vote up)
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>> #277705
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>> #277755
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I'm just gonna say the writing on this isn't super good. It's really generically bad "Men can't write women"
I'm sorry if it doesn't meet your standards, and I'm always looking to improve. Do you think you could give any hints about where exactly it really fell off for you or where to improve on? Kinda hard to know where to focus when I'm just told its all generically bad!
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>> #277864
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I'm sorry if it doesn't meet your standards, and I'm always looking to improve. Do you think you could give any hints about where exactly it really fell off for you or where to improve on? Kinda hard to know where to focus when I'm just told its all generically bad!
It's written like someone who has a vague idea of what sexy means, and what words are considered sexy, but who just mashed them together, while also trying to sound sophisticated. "Puffy sex" just sounds...uncomfortable for example
>> #277878
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It's written like someone who has a vague idea of what sexy means, and what words are considered sexy, but who just mashed them together, while also trying to sound sophisticated. "Puffy sex" just sounds...uncomfortable for example
Mhmm! Ok then, I'll try and focus more on those aspects. I'll admit in this one perhaps I focused a bit too much on the story rather than too heavily on the sexy, smutty parts of it, which means that they may have been rushed and like you said, give an idea of "I think I'm being sexy" rather than actually being sexy. Thanks for the advice! I'll try and improve on that for next time and pick my words better ^^
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>> #401738
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I'm just gonna say the writing on this isn't super good. It's really generically bad "Men can't write women"
Wow. That's sexism, folks. We frown upon that. Why is everyone against us (men) now?