If you're wondering why Bayo's text changes in the last panel changes it's because it was clashing with Lucina's cape and at that point I had already merged the layers like an idiot and going back to change everything was more effort than it's worth imo
Ogodei-Khan said: You've nailed down Bayonetta's tone quite well, although I'm not sure even she would use language quite that foul.
You're right about that, the language is more of a personal preference. Sometimes I'm not sure if I should prioritize kinks or proper characterization.
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If you're wondering why Bayo's text changes in the last panel changes it's because it was clashing with Lucina's cape and at that point I had already merged the layers like an idiot and going back to change everything was more effort than it's worth imo
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You've nailed down Bayonetta's tone quite well, although I'm not sure even she would use language quite that foul.
You're right about that, the language is more of a personal preference. Sometimes I'm not sure if I should prioritize kinks or proper characterization.