Posted on 2020-04-14 04:50:30
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Just a note since it's been a consistent mistake this run, Idpet

You confuse 'banish' and 'vanish'. Banishment is when another person makes you go away, potentially to somewhere specific. Vanishing is for when it isn't specified if someone else does it or it just happens, and it's implied to be vis a vis "without a trace". You'll want vanish here, or 'be banished' if you insist on an acting agent.

Posted on 2020-04-14 04:58:49
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Oh, I see. That happened before? So I can check it.
Thank you. I had no idea that Vanish and Banish were different things xD

Posted on 2020-04-14 08:34:03
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I feel banish works here cause she's causing the thoughts to go away

Posted on 2020-04-14 09:03:38
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i suggest you look at this ell.stackexchange.com/que...and-banish-any-difference

Posted on 2020-04-14 11:04:52
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Yeah, but then grammatically you need to add 'be' and finish it with the suffix 'ed'. You shouldn't say 'her human mindset will banish soon' any more than you should say 'thoughts to appear away', instead of 'go away' or 'disappear'.

Yes, it makes sense, but it matters how you say it. It's a serious moment you don't want to undermine with bad grammar and a weird syntax.



It happened in the second image in this pool. Glad to help:3

Posted on 2020-04-14 14:38:15
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Lol, thanks so much for the English lesson!
XD

Posted on 2020-04-14 16:39:55
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This is a happy ending to me. The real world should be so lucky.

Posted on 2020-04-15 06:22:13
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Yes, yes indeed,