Done, so sorry that took so long. A few notes about the character names: Noa was spelt differently in the fight and in the bedroom so I tried to change them a little bit to reflect that. The way Otone's name is written leaves the pronounciation ambiguous, from what I could tell it could be said "otone", "nene", "neon" or "nonnon", I thought otone sounds the nicest so I went with that, if the author has provided an official pronounciation guide please do let me know and I will edit it.
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A few notes about the character names: Noa was spelt differently in the fight and in the bedroom so I tried to change them a little bit to reflect that.
The way Otone's name is written leaves the pronounciation ambiguous, from what I could tell it could be said "otone", "nene", "neon" or "nonnon", I thought otone sounds the nicest so I went with that, if the author has provided an official pronounciation guide please do let me know and I will edit it.