Made an account just to post this comment, I have to say your dragon character is awesome and amazingly written, the idea of true benevolent hypnosis/mind control is a concept Ive fallen in love with and youve really nailed it with Clavi!
Honestly the zombie thing could work if you have one of the new slaves being technically inclined and wanting to make a modification to the brainwashing booth to attempt to give it range to try to reclaim any other harem outposts and it would be able to get them before they could alert any one else there. Then while testing it there was a some kind of glitch or the file they're using gets corrupted which causes it to emit the zombie programming.
@Latios Agreed, about the green one. My favorite type of mind control by far. A slave who's so deeply in their owner's pocket that they can be trusted with their autonomy back is much more exciting than a slave who's only obedient because they're under some kind of active control. Glad you like the dragon story idea, and interesting to hear about your scrapped one too. About not being a fan of the 'zombie aesthetic', me neither. I just used it as a shorthand, but the way I actually intend to portray the trance is less zombie-like and more like a Black Friday crowd if their Master was a 80% off discount.
@Flesh I like the 'contingency trigger going haywire' suggestion, I might go with that. Something lying dormant in all of them already, so it can spread from member to member just by hearing the trigger phrase.
Well, that's a shame, but good that you're forward about this. And good luck with the writer's block. (and, like, happens to the best of us) As for the zombie trance, I think some brainwashing machine or contingency trigger going haywire and doing a full override could be a reasonable catalyst.
Date May 31, 2024UserSector92Rating QuestionableScore28(vote up)
@Rocky uh, sorry in-advance if this is a joke going over my head but, this isn't AI art, this is art of an AI character. ajserok's devianart bio mentions he do MMD stuff "every once in a while" , and this is clearly something like MMD.
Felicia's going to be playing in your town all of next week, and everyone's going! Reviews call the show "entrancing", "hypnotic" and "captivating!" You'll want to keep coming back again and again.
tophathypnotist
2024-06-01 08:30:56>> #545597
pokemongirl
2024-05-23 03:14:22>> #544813
*drools and rubs* @.@
Haelo
2024-05-23 02:26:43>> #544809
BrilliantShadow
2024-05-22 22:44:04>> #544796
Mentioned a lot on twitter, but the perspective definitely makes this nice!
asethm
2024-05-22 22:26:30>> #544794
Hypnorgasm
2024-06-01 08:28:19>> #545595
It's translated into English, so it may sound better in its original language.
DanGambino
2024-06-01 01:02:24>> #545571
Unknown12
2024-06-01 07:26:31>> #545594
Master&Lover
2024-06-01 06:03:52>> #545589
NotTrustful
2024-06-01 07:04:12>> #545593
Musna
2024-06-01 06:58:47>> #545592
IDPet
2024-06-01 01:06:35>> #545573
Maninthemask
2024-06-01 06:47:40>> #545590
Grahmin
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urahara64360
2024-05-23 22:13:31>> #544869
Thalarynth
2024-05-23 21:38:08>> #544863
@Flesh I like the 'contingency trigger going haywire' suggestion, I might go with that. Something lying dormant in all of them already, so it can spread from member to member just by hearing the trigger phrase.
Flesh
2024-05-23 19:35:17>> #544852
And good luck with the writer's block. (and, like, happens to the best of us)
As for the zombie trance, I think some brainwashing machine or contingency trigger going haywire and doing a full override could be a reasonable catalyst.
Mindwipe
2024-06-01 04:54:34>> #545588
Gengarzilla
2024-06-01 04:17:31>> #545587
Anon_DRONE
2024-06-01 02:19:47>> #545578
but,
this isn't AI art, this is art of an AI character. ajserok's devianart bio mentions he do MMD stuff "every once in a while" , and this is clearly something like MMD.
Rocky
2024-05-31 13:40:02>> #545541
Euronet
2024-05-31 02:15:14>> #545514
HashaeBadooi
2024-06-01 04:08:17>> #545585
pokemongirl
2024-06-01 03:22:49>> #545583
Dat bunny suit @.@
PsychoFox
2024-06-01 02:40:13>> #545581
Felicia's going to be playing in your town all of next week, and everyone's going!
Reviews call the show "entrancing", "hypnotic" and "captivating!" You'll want to keep coming back again and again.