So does anyone else get the feeling that whatever she said to the bunny will be relevant later? Seemed more in-depth than a simple "sleep and forget" command.
Date Apr 16, 2016UserdkraiderRating ExplicitScore44(vote up)
If you're taking suggestions, how about Izayoi from BlazBlue: static2.wikia.nocookie.ne...zblue/images/7/7a/Izayoi_(Chronophantasma,_Character_Select_Artwork).png coiled by some tentacles and hypnotized by an eye in a bikini?
Sure thing man, but the eye, is it embedded in the bikini or did you mean shes wearing the bikini and the eye is a part of the tentacles? Also do you want kaa thick tentacles or rope ones like in this image?
dkraider said: uh, here is my next drawing. Uh, didn't mean to have that arm up there completely showing it was meant to be partially off screen... um anyway yea. second post. yippee. feel free to criticize or comment. not like i could stop you. I would like to thank everyone though that left a positive comment on my last pic so uh thanks. Also if anyone would like me to draw a specific character to help keep me going just comment who and how that wauly i dont stop drawing. btw this is an OC.
This looks really good :D
If you're taking suggestions, how about Izayoi from BlazBlue: static2.wikia.nocookie.ne...zblue/images/7/7a/Izayoi_(Chronophantasma,_Character_Select_Artwork).png coiled by some tentacles and hypnotized by an eye in a bikini?
uh, here is my next drawing. Uh, didn't mean to have that arm up there completely showing it was meant to be partially off screen... um anyway yea. second post. yippee. feel free to criticize or comment. not like i could stop you. I would like to thank everyone though that left a positive comment on my last pic so uh thanks. Also if anyone would like me to draw a specific character to help keep me going just comment who and how that wauly i dont stop drawing. btw this is an OC.
Date Apr 16, 2016UserBlack--WaveRating QuestionableScore84(vote up)
EoD said: I just noticed how much your English has improved. The wording can still be a bit stiff and unnatural at times, but for the most part it flows very well. Good on ya!
I don't think the English in this post is a particularly good example of his improvement...
"I've just done what you order me to" is weird, should probably be "ordered me too".
"Masturbate all the time for lunch break" - Masturbate through the whole lunch break sounds better. The "All the time" doesn't really make sense, unless it was "all of the time" and even then it should be "During" lunch break(s).
"Made me to be" could just be "Made me be"
I would probably rewrite the first part along the lines of
"Hi Master! I've just finished (done works as well) what you ordered me to do. I masturbated all throughout lunch break and did so without cumming at all. I was on the edge at least 7 times because of how sensitive you made me be"
If the order given was intended to be a permanent "every-day" order the wording would have to be a little different.
Honest;y, I've always thought Vahn's text was pretty well-written and very well thought out, so I don't really see this as an improvement over any recent work.
I just noticed how much your English has improved. The wording can still be a bit stiff and unnatural at times, but for the most part it flows very well. Good on ya!
Mister Vi said: I was gonna say "why not both" and then the idea popped in my head of having like a reverse harem of mistresses who take turns owning you.. like a timeshare hypno-subject. Like weekends are Lyra's time Monday-Tuesday is rarity. ect. ect.
That's my dream. I can't believe someone put this into words.
Annihilatrix
2016-05-24 07:42:45>> #105700
Whatever you do, don't think of their nostrils as a mustache.
CANNOT UNSEE!
Robobacon
2016-04-17 02:49:07>> #99414
Sirloin
2016-04-16 21:16:31>> #99356
Whatever you do, don't think of their nostrils as a mustache.
I compensate by imagining it as part of Rouge's rustler shtick with Applejack's hat.
Ogodei-Khan
2016-04-16 20:07:16>> #99349
Argonis
2016-04-16 09:10:57>> #99307
Whatever you do, don't think of their nostrils as a mustache.
To late
Ryansonics
2021-08-26 04:56:14>> #434841
kaavictim2
2018-09-03 06:51:39>> #278964
Ogodei-Khan
2016-04-16 08:11:58>> #99295
supersmasher2020
2016-12-15 06:24:44>> #144208
www.nooooooooooooooo.com/
Thank you. *button-mashing ensues*
langtang
2016-12-13 04:53:09>> #143700
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
www.nooooooooooooooo.com/
supersmasher2020
2016-11-28 05:57:12>> #140559
and all we'll have are shitty minaps!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
langtang
2016-09-27 07:22:39>> #127893
One day we'll chase away every artist willing to draw stuff for us. We lost voiceinsight recently too, apparently.
and all we'll have are shitty minaps!
Mindwipe
2016-09-04 07:07:53>> #123623
someguy231
2018-03-11 03:56:16>> #238967
Jacob_the_Xerneas
2017-03-09 22:29:33>> #160521
possession-pleader
2016-04-16 08:31:35>> #99299
Keep it up!!
cyberbladeau
2016-04-16 08:20:03>> #99297
Had this commissioned a long while back when I was a Halo fanboy.
I'm pretty sure this isn't everyone's cup of tea.
And you would be correct sir.
All I can think when I look at this is "what the fuck am I looking at?"
someguy231
2016-04-16 06:29:41>> #99286
I'm pretty sure this isn't everyone's cup of tea.
sexfire
2016-08-20 23:56:27>> #120606
*raises his hand*
rocketracer294
2016-04-16 11:08:44>> #99319
Nazwa
2016-04-16 10:17:33>> #99313
*raises hand*
Halarith
2016-04-16 08:44:33>> #99302
Halarith
2016-04-16 08:43:15>> #99300
RunningAmok
2017-06-29 18:35:31>> #184975
A Greninja Attack
dkraider
2016-04-16 09:09:50>> #99306
This looks really good :D
If you're taking suggestions, how about Izayoi from BlazBlue: static2.wikia.nocookie.ne...zblue/images/7/7a/Izayoi_(Chronophantasma,_Character_Select_Artwork).png coiled by some tentacles and hypnotized by an eye in a bikini?
Sure thing man, but the eye, is it embedded in the bikini or did you mean shes wearing the bikini and the eye is a part of the tentacles? Also do you want kaa thick tentacles or rope ones like in this image?
eaglet
2016-04-16 08:44:15>> #99301
uh, here is my next drawing. Uh, didn't mean to have that arm up there completely showing it was meant to be partially off screen... um anyway yea. second post. yippee. feel free to criticize or comment. not like i could stop you. I would like to thank everyone though that left a positive comment on my last pic so uh thanks. Also if anyone would like me to draw a specific character to help keep me going just comment who and how that wauly i dont stop drawing. btw this is an OC.
This looks really good :D
If you're taking suggestions, how about Izayoi from BlazBlue: static2.wikia.nocookie.ne...zblue/images/7/7a/Izayoi_(Chronophantasma,_Character_Select_Artwork).png coiled by some tentacles and hypnotized by an eye in a bikini?
dkraider
2016-04-16 04:32:36>> #99272
Black--Wave
2016-07-06 22:34:11>> #113061
So are we to assume by the red dot on Dawns' machine that she has been "caught?"
I'm glad someone picked up on that. =)
Doublea
2016-05-10 09:48:45>> #103154
gothboyfang
2016-04-18 16:57:59>> #99705
You've got some good ideas.
Thanks :)
Kansattica
2016-04-16 22:55:47>> #99369
Could be a mindwipe then get a pokemon personality with a matching revealing costume before being sold as pets/playthings.
You've got some good ideas.
pokemongirl
2016-04-16 21:39:01>> #99365
Huh, never thought of that. I'm definitely gonna need to see an 'after' pic now.
EDIT oh jeez, the more I think about it I realize you've opened up a whole new can of fetish worms for me with this brain-swapping malarky ;-)
Yay more fetishes *giggles*
Could be a mindwipe then get a pokemon personality with a matching revealing costume before being sold as pets/playthings.
True enough but I really want I mind transfer with the pokemon trading machine from the anime now : )
Bibla499
2016-04-21 07:57:13>> #100078
Hey can you do a manip of Sally hypnotizing the viewer?
Sure thing.
sonicfire65
2016-04-18 07:15:18>> #99648
Robobacon
2016-04-17 02:51:38>> #99417
Give him the funny kiss.
sonicfire65
2016-04-16 18:49:59>> #99341
Rose-Knight
2016-04-16 05:46:24>> #99279
vahn_yourdoom
2016-04-18 20:29:05>> #99727
Oh god that sounds torturous. I love it.
it's a way to make the victim craving for the D when the time comes :shrug:
@ jimskog
thanks for the corrections XD
jimskog
2016-04-17 06:53:17>> #99450
However (constructive criticism here) I don't agree with EoD, I think the text here is much more awkwardly phrased than your previous works.
jimskog
2016-04-17 06:51:13>> #99449
I just noticed how much your English has improved. The wording can still be a bit stiff and unnatural at times, but for the most part it flows very well. Good on ya!
I don't think the English in this post is a particularly good example of his improvement...
"I've just done what you order me to" is weird, should probably be "ordered me too".
"Masturbate all the time for lunch break" - Masturbate through the whole lunch break sounds better. The "All the time" doesn't really make sense, unless it was "all of the time" and even then it should be "During" lunch break(s).
"Made me to be" could just be "Made me be"
I would probably rewrite the first part along the lines of
"Hi Master!
I've just finished (done works as well) what you ordered me to do.
I masturbated all throughout lunch break and
did so without cumming at all.
I was on the edge at least 7 times because
of how sensitive you made me be"
If the order given was intended to be a permanent "every-day" order the wording would have to be a little different.
Honest;y, I've always thought Vahn's text was pretty well-written and very well thought out, so I don't really see this as an improvement over any recent work.
EoD
2016-04-16 13:04:11>> #99330
CosmicNeko
2016-04-15 23:06:16>> #99230
Defcon7
2016-12-08 07:56:49>> #142556
I was gonna say "why not both" and then the idea popped in my head of having like a reverse harem of mistresses who take turns owning you.. like a timeshare hypno-subject. Like weekends are Lyra's time Monday-Tuesday is rarity. ect. ect.
That's my dream. I can't believe someone put this into words.
Brokander_Reborn
2016-12-08 03:01:49>> #142484
I know this comment is ridiculously late for this picture, but it bugged me and I had to mention it.
That's a wine glass, not a champagne glass... -.-
you're right I never noticed before! (just in case you thought otherwise I am not being sarcastic right now I really didn't notice before)
freefloater
2016-12-08 01:14:01>> #142475
That's a wine glass, not a champagne glass... -.-
Scrounge
2016-04-30 06:03:37>> #101489
asaola
2016-04-18 07:58:15>> #99662