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Jb007
>> #381183
Posted on 2020-08-08 21:44:01
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hey guys i meant to post this a while ago. my bad.
What do you think?
Do you think the glowing effect covers up the spirals a bit too much?
Do you have any suggestions?
As usual leave them down below!

>> #381184
Posted on 2020-08-08 23:50:19
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I'm not a native English speaker, but it should be "anointing", not "annoiting", right?
Other than that this is pretty good
slipslideman
>> #381213
Posted on 2020-08-09 04:33:01
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If we're critiquing grammar:

"Without* your skills"

"Oh you're* too kind"

"Bear* your children"
Jb007
>> #381215
Posted on 2020-08-09 05:22:27
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slipslideman said:
If we're critiquing grammar:

"Without* your skills"

"Oh you're* too kind"

"Bear* your children"


ava-é-mesmo? said:
I'm not a native English speaker, but it should be "anointing", not "annoiting", right?
Other than that this is pretty good


I'm only seeing now thank you for the grammar check
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