bottomless breasts drool duplicatetrash femsub happy_trance long_hair maledom nude spiral_eyes symbol_in_eyes text tongue tongue_out topless

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ghost13
>> #389416
Posted on 2020-10-09 23:58:08
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What even is this?

Also, white hair? What a chuunibyou.

DuplicateTrash
>> #389474
Posted on 2020-10-10 04:11:47
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ghost13 said:
What even is this?

Also, white hair? What a chuunibyou.


Lol, it was supposed to be a joke, but I guess it failed.

Anyways I'm still new here, if you got suggestions, ideas, critique, or comments please send it.

ghost13
>> #389487
Posted on 2020-10-10 06:07:24
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DuplicateTrash said:
Lol, it was supposed to be a joke, but I guess it failed.

Anyways I'm still new here, if you got suggestions, ideas, critique, or comments please send it.


Well, first suggestion: If you made this yourself, you should tag yourself as the artist.

Bizarre dialogue aside, this isn't to bad if you ask me. But I'm not an artist...

Cahnagey
>> #389506
Posted on 2020-10-10 08:22:00
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I like it, but I would like it more if the girl was more in view. Like if the viewpoint was shifted downwards so she was larger and the guy was less visible behind her.

Just my nitpick/opinion. Right now the guy seems to be the focus for me, when he seems less detailed and boring.

DuplicateTrash
>> #389775
Posted on 2020-10-12 11:44:31
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I see, noted

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