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EXkAizuhan
>> #398283
Posted on 2020-12-11 20:29:43
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Page 8! Once Sonic came in Tails’s 2 tailed booty, spirals will disappear and activate a permanent hypno

OKboomer
>> #398285
Posted on 2020-12-11 20:38:37
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WHY MY CHILDHOOD

EXkAizuhan
>> #398288
Posted on 2020-12-11 20:51:22
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OKboomer said:
WHY MY CHILDHOOD


I’m sorry for your childhood O.B

Demfro
>> #398291
Posted on 2020-12-11 21:20:45
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OKboomer said:
WHY MY CHILDHOOD


I'm surprised that this specifically was the post that killed your childhood. You're on a pornsite.

Demfro
>> #398292
Posted on 2020-12-11 21:29:15
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Good work so far EXkAizuhan. While your art may not be perfect, I'm loving the story and the character interactions. Though if I could give one suggestion, it does seem a little repetative to have the bubble of [Permanent hypno activate] and then have tails explain that he's permenantly hypnotized. Perhaps a more 'show don't tell' approach would be better, especially since you already explained what would happen if sonic came inside tails.

Not forcing you to do any of this by the way, just giving some constructive criticism that you can take or leave.

EXkAizuhan
>> #398294
Posted on 2020-12-11 21:51:54
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Demfro said:
Good work so far EXkAizuhan. While your art may not be perfect, I'm loving the story and the character interactions. Though if I could give one suggestion, it does seem a little repetative to have the bubble of [Permanent hypno activate] and then have tails explain that he's permenantly hypnotized. Perhaps a more 'show don't tell' approach would be better, especially since you already explained what would happen if sonic came inside tails.

Not forcing you to do any of this by the way, just giving some constructive criticism that you can take or leave.

It’s fine, I can take that, I won’t mention the explanation again. ^^

Wolf_Appledore999
>> #398636
Posted on 2020-12-14 15:45:22
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If he Orders Tails to be a Girl permanently, would Tails obey?

OKboomer
>> #398849
Posted on 2020-12-16 14:36:11
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Demfro said:
I'm surprised that this specifically was the post that killed your childhood. You're on a pornsite.


idk I watch alot of hentai but not sonic and tails having sex

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