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Btbrid01
>> #403548
Posted on 2021-01-23 22:04:03
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Can anyone actually read some of the text behind the regular text, or am I just blind?

Naesala
>> #403557
Posted on 2021-01-23 23:00:14
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Needs work. Interesting idea marred with poor sentence structure and tensing. A real shame cuz I think there's something delightfully devilish here.

bagchief
>> #403801
Posted on 2021-01-25 14:11:07
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Naesala said:
Needs work. Interesting idea marred with poor sentence structure and tensing. A real shame cuz I think there's something delightfully devilish here.


Thanks for the criticism, not the writer but if you can fo a bit more in-depth I'd love to hear it and send it to them.

CallistoViolet
>> #406970
Posted on 2021-02-18 11:14:11
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Holy shit this is amazing.

Fungalfury
>> #481613
Posted on 2022-09-08 09:28:14
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God I wish this had a sequel so goddamn bad.

Anonymous
>> #484931
Posted on 2022-10-08 21:50:54
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the transparent text says 'murderer basturd bitch go to hell' then i hate you go kill yourself' then 'why why why whats the point' then 'meeting you was a mistake trusting you was a mistake you were a mistake' then 'i want to go home i want to go home i want to go home' then 'i hate it i hate it, its cold numb and aching you made me like this, ruined me, made me choke on rotting blood, filling my lungs and broke me' lastly 'never let me go'

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