I was feeling some femboys tonight. Once again Master Maichin has some hot nasty boys on his Rule 34 page and I know I want to make a manip of at least one more. Also I didn't know if the crossdressing tag was necessary but I feel like it still kinda fits the mold people look for when they look at that tag so no harm done?
Is it, though? He only agreed because he was forced to be the dom's friend, judging by "you are my friend after all." And there's no guarantee he'll forget what happened afterwards, so he'll probably be incredibly uncomfortable after he takes the clothes off. That, and that the dom basically just admitted to trying to planning to mock him, and considering how this is JUST the dom talking, the others inside are probably going to be pretty rude, but he's still going in.
Anonimity said: Is it, though? He only agreed because he was forced to be the dom's friend, judging by "you are my friend after all." And there's no guarantee he'll forget what happened afterwards, so he'll probably be incredibly uncomfortable after he takes the clothes off. That, and that the dom basically just admitted to trying to planning to mock him, and considering how this is JUST the dom talking, the others inside are probably going to be pretty rude, but he's still going in.
I dunno. Not that wholesome to me.
Yeah I tried getting it across that she told everyone inside not to be mean like they had planned but I ran out of space. Also just to be clear it was his idea, there wasn’t any kind of reverse psychology at play. I tried making it Wholesome but didn’t really know how well I did. That’s why the Wholesome tag is absent.
JJMayoBoy said: I tried making it Wholesome but didn’t really know how well I did.
You failed, having the dom say "we were all going to mock you by doing X" then the sub saying "well I guess I am okay with being mocked" is not wholesome. The manip is so wishy washy the dom comes off as an incompetent psychopath.
Cloyd said: You failed, having the dom say "we were all going to mock you by doing X" then the sub saying "well I guess I am okay with being mocked" is not wholesome. The manip is so wishy washy the dom comes off as an incompetent psychopath.
I actually read the second part first by accident and thought this'd go a completely different direction, but I think I liked it this way more. It's not what I'd usually go for, but the writing is good, and the story, thought provoking. The characters are interesting, awkward and perhaps prone to errors of judgement, which feels like it fits the history you've given them rather well.
JJMayoBoy said: Yeah I tried getting it across that she told everyone inside not to be mean like they had planned but I ran out of space. Also just to be clear it was his idea, there wasn’t any kind of reverse psychology at play. I tried making it Wholesome but didn’t really know how well I did. That’s why the Wholesome tag is absent.
Not gonna lie a non-wholesome version would be pretty good too
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Wholesome <3
Is it, though? He only agreed because he was forced to be the dom's friend, judging by "you are my friend after all." And there's no guarantee he'll forget what happened afterwards, so he'll probably be incredibly uncomfortable after he takes the clothes off. That, and that the dom basically just admitted to trying to planning to mock him, and considering how this is JUST the dom talking, the others inside are probably going to be pretty rude, but he's still going in.
I dunno. Not that wholesome to me.
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Is it, though? He only agreed because he was forced to be the dom's friend, judging by "you are my friend after all." And there's no guarantee he'll forget what happened afterwards, so he'll probably be incredibly uncomfortable after he takes the clothes off. That, and that the dom basically just admitted to trying to planning to mock him, and considering how this is JUST the dom talking, the others inside are probably going to be pretty rude, but he's still going in.
I dunno. Not that wholesome to me.
Yeah I tried getting it across that she told everyone inside not to be mean like they had planned but I ran out of space. Also just to be clear it was his idea, there wasn’t any kind of reverse psychology at play. I tried making it Wholesome but didn’t really know how well I did. That’s why the Wholesome tag is absent.
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You failed, having the dom say "we were all going to mock you by doing X" then the sub saying "well I guess I am okay with being mocked" is not wholesome. The manip is so wishy washy the dom comes off as an incompetent psychopath.
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You failed, having the dom say "we were all going to mock you by doing X" then the sub saying "well I guess I am okay with being mocked" is not wholesome. The manip is so wishy washy the dom comes off as an incompetent psychopath.
Eh can’t win em all.
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I actually read the second part first by accident and thought this'd go a completely different direction, but I think I liked it this way more. It's not what I'd usually go for, but the writing is good, and the story, thought provoking. The characters are interesting, awkward and perhaps prone to errors of judgement, which feels like it fits the history you've given them rather well.
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Yeah I tried getting it across that she told everyone inside not to be mean like they had planned but I ran out of space. Also just to be clear it was his idea, there wasn’t any kind of reverse psychology at play. I tried making it Wholesome but didn’t really know how well I did. That’s why the Wholesome tag is absent.
Not gonna lie a non-wholesome version would be pretty good too