SO! You thought I was losing my touch huh? That I'd leave this cute quiet guy in a perpetual state of failed wholesomeness?
Nah I just wanted to give this character a happy ending so I made this little compilation of things going right for him following the previous post. If you're angry from the lack of hypnosis in this post check the parent for backstory and know I'll be making another post later that has some crueler doms and FEMBOYS FEMBOYS FEMBOYS.
Somewhere I keep thinking he has a soft humiliation fetish... That's why he agreed to join the party... Now that he's "gay" in certain outfits the bully partly get him hot... Who knows... Maybe next year's party he might suggest to his friend to invite a second boy...
Nothing's more humiliating than gay-domming your bully, right?
I like the use of colors to quickly show which of these are different characters. At first, though, I thought the headings ("Math Class...", "Lunch Time...", etc) were someone speaking, especially because of the ellipses, like the earlier dialogue "Asshole...". The larger text size helps those headings stand apart, but you could consider underlining the heading or using a colon instead of ellipses after it. You could also add a line break between sections to show time passing.
Hypnorgasm said: I like the use of colors to quickly show which of these are different characters. At first, though, I thought the headings ("Math Class...", "Lunch Time...", etc) were someone speaking, especially because of the ellipses, like the earlier dialogue "Asshole...". The larger text size helps those headings stand apart, but you could consider underlining the heading or using a colon instead of ellipses after it. You could also add a line break between sections to show time passing.
A line break is sort of unrealistic for how I write and the program I use is very limiting in the text department, however I will look into making those transitions more clear in the future.
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Nah I just wanted to give this character a happy ending so I made this little compilation of things going right for him following the previous post. If you're angry from the lack of hypnosis in this post check the parent for backstory and know I'll be making another post later that has some crueler doms and FEMBOYS FEMBOYS FEMBOYS.
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Tunnel Snakes Rule!
Well, yeah, you did it. Another favorite. You and furrwhore are easily my favorite manippers on this site.
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Well, yeah, you did it. Another favorite. You and furrwhore are easily my favorite manippers on this site.
Thank you truly and happy you caught the Fallout 3 reference
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Well, yeah, you did it. Another favorite. You and furrwhore are easily my favorite manippers on this site.
You have good taste ;)
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Nothing's more humiliating than gay-domming your bully, right?
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I like the use of colors to quickly show which of these are different characters. At first, though, I thought the headings ("Math Class...", "Lunch Time...", etc) were someone speaking, especially because of the ellipses, like the earlier dialogue "Asshole...". The larger text size helps those headings stand apart, but you could consider underlining the heading or using a colon instead of ellipses after it. You could also add a line break between sections to show time passing.
A line break is sort of unrealistic for how I write and the program I use is very limiting in the text department, however I will look into making those transitions more clear in the future.