arashidrgn_(manipper) bimbofication brain_drain caption cat_girl crayon1006 crossed_eyes dog_girl drool femsub furry happy_trance iskra manip school_uniform short_hair text zengel

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Kala
>> #405093
Posted on 2021-02-04 10:16:05
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Arashi back with some good brain drain content again? Lovely~

Lloyd
>> #405122
Posted on 2021-02-04 20:24:05
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This is simultaneously "exactly my thing" and also... pretty horrifying. It manages to hit that valley.

Gives me the jibblies.

Naesala
>> #405192
Posted on 2021-02-05 05:43:25
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Usually I'm all about arashi's stuff, but this seems like it's missing a part 1 and part 2 setting things up. Straight to the climax. Oh well.

arashidrgn
>> #405198
Posted on 2021-02-05 06:47:40
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Sorry if this hit a few people the wrong way. Only thing I have to say about it is that the hypno kink in general has a dark side to it. As to their being a part 1 or 2: Generally for captions you're taking a snippet of the best part of a larger concept and making that. The before and after are implied and up to the readers imagination.

.heck
>> #405226
Posted on 2021-02-05 19:39:48
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I must say I find this exquisite. My only criticism is that it almost seems like desert before dinner. Who was Kimberly *before* she became the dumbest in a pack of drool-soaked lobotomites? As is, this feels like the masterful climax to a greater story that doesn't exist.

awesomemanftw
>> #405325
Posted on 2021-02-06 12:06:31
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so good to see another caption from you :D

Lcdouchebag
>> #405339
Posted on 2021-02-06 17:51:18
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Dang, arashi, no one does dummy dialogue quite like you and I cannot get enough of it. Always glad to see more work from ya!!

Naesala
>> #405358
Posted on 2021-02-06 20:51:18
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arashidrgn said:
Sorry if this hit a few people the wrong way. Only thing I have to say about it is that the hypno kink in general has a dark side to it. As to their being a part 1 or 2: Generally for captions you're taking a snippet of the best part of a larger concept and making that. The before and after are implied and up to the readers imagination.


Sorry I rubbed you the wrong way, but, well, "the best part" is of course subjective. For many, the best part is the setup, the journey, not the finale. I prefer your stories where things are set up /and then/ the girl's mind is drained away. Not telling you how to write, just saying I like this less than your other works because it's just the climax. To each their own.

Zelinko
>> #405364
Posted on 2021-02-06 21:33:07
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Why is she drooling ink?

.heck
>> #405498
Posted on 2021-02-07 17:29:44
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Zelinko said:
Why is she drooling ink?


Because there was some ink on the desk, and do you really expect a drooly dimwit like that not to drink it?

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