Posted on 2021-03-08 22:42:57
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Hello everyone it's been a while but here it is, the finale of my Monika series. With an admittedly cheesy plot twist at the end. I really enjoyed doing this and I hope that you enjoyed it to. now I got to figure out what I should do next.

Did you like it?
Do you have any suggestions?
do you have any critques?
As usual leave them down below!

Posted on 2021-03-08 23:08:57
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Right text is kinda hard to read but looking cool joker

Posted on 2021-03-08 23:36:03
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you know, whenever I get a comment like this, I never have trouble reading it but thanks for the compliment

Posted on 2021-03-09 19:55:30
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If possible, do the same with the other girls in the club. It would be nice to see that. good job wey

Posted on 2021-03-09 23:38:13
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Noted

Posted on 2021-05-21 10:27:42
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So wait, if she foresaw that Marcus would mess with her personality, wouldn't she set the backdoor program to reset her personality automatically?

If you're anticipating mind control, you don't make the mind reset optional.

Posted on 2021-06-22 05:47:07
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Well he was doing the tests to make sure she was under his control, if the reset was done automatically, he'd pick up on it, stop her, and she be back where she started. So her plan was to wait till all the tests were done override everything he did, all lock him in the digital world, with her, forever. I guess she didn't think she'd like being the submissive as much as she discovered.

Posted on 2021-11-20 20:59:53
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Transcript:
Phew, that was amazing, well then. Now that that's done, all tests are complete, we can now head to the real world!

Once we're there, all the changes to your personality will become permanent, since your body will no longer be data!

Of course, there are going to be a couple problems, my family, concerned neighbors, and of course, any of my friends who want to hangout!

Thankfully, my parents are never home so I don't have to worry about that. And pretty sure I could pass you off as my new girlfriend. Although, if just might have to uh share you with them. That reminds me, how long have I been...SIX MINUTES, it feels more like six hours. Kinda relieved, least I'm not labeled missing.

So, are you ready to go?


He doesn't know, he doesn't know that I foresaw this. Him taking control, fortunately, I planned ahead, this backdoor program should be able to not undo everything he's done to me, but also close the portal, trapping him here, with me forever!)

(That said, even though I planned this out even if going to the real world will leave me enthralled. I want this!)

love you, Master Marcus. Even without the programing you put in me. That's what caused all of this after all. I want to be close to you, to hug you, touch you, kiss you, love you, to be with you till the day I die!)

(But that doesn't matter anymore. Nothing that I want matters. After this, all that matters is Just Master)

YES, I'M READY!