Posted on 2014-01-06 02:19:50
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Fluttershy was picking flowers for her bunny Angel. He loved the cyan ones the most. She saw her friend, Pinkie Pie, walking though the field. But something was… off about her. More than normal.

Pinkie was naked, showing off her body for everyone to see. And her eyes were… glowing? Fluttershy moved in to get a better look. “P-Pinkie? What are you doing?” Fluttershy said frightened.

“Oh there you are.” said Pinkie. “We’ve been looking for you all day long.” “Pinkie? What are you doing? Who’s we? And why are you looking for me?” Fluttershy started moving away slowly from Pinkie.

Her friend was no longer who she knew. The once bubbly Pinkie Pie, who would bounce up and down to and from everywhere, was a calmed down pony, and her voice, was no longer as high pitched. “We are looking for you to complete our mission for our master.” “M-Master?” Fluttershy soon was trebling from the thought of who, or what, this master could be.

Pinkie tore off Fluttershy's skirt and simple shirt, making her naked, just like her. "Pinkie!" Fluttershy soon yelled at her. "What's gotten into you!"

Suddenly, a streak of colors was in the sky above. It was Rainbow Dash! Maybe she’ll make Pinkie Pie act normal again. Rainbow landed near Fluttershy. “Oh thank you Dash! I need your help! Pinkie’s gone crazy and I –“ Fluttershy looked up and saw Dash. She was naked, and her eyes were glowing too. “Dashie…”

“Come on Flutter.” said Dash. “It will be just fine. You’ll serve master, and you’ll love it just much as me and Pinkie. Dash soon grabbed Fluttershy and started holding her. “But I-I don’t want to!” said Fluttershy, trying to free herself without hurting her dear friend. Pinkie soon grabbed one of Fluttershy’s legs. “Don’t worry Fluttershy! Our friends will be here soon to help change your mind!” said Pinkie.

Soon, Applejack came from behind Dash. She grabbed Fluttershy’s other leg. “Quit yer fightin’ Fluttershy! We want you to enjoy tha feelin’ from our mastah too!”

Twilight and Rarity soon teleported in. Eyes glowing and all. “Settle down dahr’ling. It will be all over soon.” Rarity said, as she grabbed one of Flutter’s arms. Twilight soon grabbed the other, as the group of her controlled friends soon starting putting her on the soft ground. “Fluttershy! Come on. Why do you think we would do this if we didn’t like it? We want you to be more happy!” said Twilight.

Soon, a cloud of black smoke appeared in front of Fluttershy. A man, in a black suit, came from the cloud, and walked into Fluttershy. “Did we do good Master? Did we? Didwedidwedidwedid—“ said Pinkie. “Yes. You all did a wonderful job in finding your friend.”

Fluttershy asks in the frightened, timid voice. "Wh-why are you doing this? Why us?" “I am simply ensuring that the Elements of Harmony remain happy with each other, as well as with a special somepony. And as your friends can attest to, I have, can, and will deliver both in spades."

Pinkie Pie speaks up once more; “Oh totally, Fluttershy! We're all super-duper-looper happy with him and each other! It'll be super-extra-special with you in it, girl!" Applejack nods next. "Reck'n she's right, sugarcube. Wouldn' be the same if'n we weren't all up in this t'gether, but it's been purdy amazin' all the same."

Twilight speaks next. "And it won't be so bad... with my help, His influence will spread across all of Equestria. The world will soon be a much better place, Fluttershy." Rarity speaks last. "And think of it, Fluttershy... we will be even more famous than we ever were before! The Elements of Harmony will be revered always... our reputations, our adventures, our relationship... they will last forever..."

Rainbow Dash interjects from behind Fluttershy. "And what's your problem with this new way, Flutters? We're all still together, just like always... just in new ways I know we're all gonna love~..."

Dash grabs Fluttershy’s hair so Fluttershy can look forward to Master. Shy soon starts crying. Her friends were now slaves to this stranger. She knew that he was playing with them like some puppets on strings. But… she couldn’t look away from him. His eyes were… shiny… And colorful… They were the most amazing thing she’s seen.

“Why are you crying Fluttershy?” the Master asks. It is at this point her eyes change to match the others and her mouth curves upward. "I am crying because I am honored you selected me to personally serve you... Master."

Posted on 2014-01-06 02:21:44
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My first time trying to right a hypno text. And a fanfic. And anything like this.

Also, my first time trying out the glow. I still have the .xcf file, so if it needs work, its still there. I was thinking about empty eyes, but I like the glow more.

The story is based off of a text manip from a hypnosis website, relating to this image, but I changed it from a simple greentext to a story, and added a small background.

EDIT: Changed the story a bit to make it more clear and fill a plothole. I may edit more in the future to help fill up more plotholes.

Posted on 2014-01-06 02:44:39
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you did pretty good

Posted on 2014-01-06 05:04:47
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Thanks mate.

Posted on 2014-01-06 06:19:16
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The prose is a bit halting, and you confuse your tenses. There's potential, though; just keep practicing. In the pic, I'd try to ensure that all the eye glows are the same lightness. Pinkie, AJ and Rarity are all bright colors, while Twilight and Dash are darker. The glow effects themselves are good, though.

Posted on 2014-01-06 08:06:29
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Thanks mate. Glad to get info from an semi-expert.

Made the glows their eye color, then used a layer effect to make it glowy.

I did a cheap way of doing it.

Posted on 2014-01-06 19:53:24
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that might just be the level of control. or how hard it was to make them crack

Posted on 2014-01-06 23:06:25
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Yeah okay, let's go with that.

Posted on 2014-04-03 11:45:36
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Oh my god, I knew I recognized parts of that text, haha! Glad to see you liked it enough to expand on it, because I certainly like what you've done!

In any case, let the record show that I also manipped this, but opted for a more reserved glow in my own manip of the same picture; this attempt can be seen with the greentext this story is based on here. (sleepymaid.com/chan/furry/res/1324.html#i1349)

It isn't much better, if at all, and I might just do it over again at some point, but I was satisfied with it at the time (likely a "if I knew then what I know now" thing. I saw this picture on rule34.xxx, I believe, in one of many searches for images ripe for the manipping, and I couldn't not. Hope y'all like what my effort has spawned! ^w^