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Mindcollector13
>> #421701
Posted on 2021-05-27 21:17:39
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Alright! And I’m back with another commission, this time from Shinzu!

And it’s starring my best girls from the three Persona games I’ve uh… sssssort of played. I never actually finished 3. I plan to eventually though.

And yes. I know I have two girls from P4 here. Listen, I find it very hard to decide between Yukino and Naoto. I’ve done two P4 runs and romanced Yukiko the first time, then Naoto the second, and I’m split between them. So they both get to be here.

Also, I’m aware Yukari’s doesn’t actually look like her version of her Persona. But her original doesn’t lend itself to a costume, so I picked the P5 variant.

Anyways, as usual, I have a story to go along with it



The world began to warp and change as reality gave way to the realm known as the Metaverse, where Yukari Takeba, Naoto Shirogane, and Ann Takamaki stepped into Mementos from the Shibuya railway station.

“Huh. You were serious. You come in and out of the shadow world from your phone” Yukari stated, looking down at Ann’s phone, which displayed an application of a Red eyeball.

“Mhm! Naoto, you said you guys went into TV’s right? That’s so much cooler!” Ann replied with a smile.

“It’s true, we did. But the method doesn’t matter right now. I hope you haven’t forgotten that we’re here to search for Yukiko, not to discuss the means by which we access this place.” Naoto said in her usual calm, but firm demeanor

“Right! You know her best, Naoto! Where do we start?” Ann asked

Naoto began looking around, taking in her surroundings

“This Mementos… What is it exactly?”

Ann’s looked down, a bit embarrassed

“Uhm… I don't really understand it all that well, but it has something to do with cognition taking form without a distortion. At least not a big one. If the distortion gets too crazy it makes a Palace or a Jail. But this is for smaller ones” she said

“Hm… I wonder why Yukiko would come here.” Naoto pondered “Apart from which, why didn't you two bring more of your teams?”

Yukari sighed

“Junpei is off being a doofus somewhere, Akihiko and Mitsuru are on vacation, who knows where Ken and Koromaru are, and Aegis and Labrys are… Looking into something.”

“Yeah. Basically the same here. Makoto and Haru are doing study abroad programs for their college stuff, Ryuji moved to the country, Yusuke was doing a world tour to ‘find his muse’ or something, Sumire is in America for a competition, Futaba had her phone taken away so she didn't get distracted for finals, and Akechi is visiting Morgana and our leader back in his hometown…. And he didn't even ask me to come along so I could visit my own boyfriend” Ann grumbled “Besides. Don't you have teammates too?”

Naoto looked a bit red in the face

“Well… I was the only one who knew Yukiko came out here. And I… Was already in the area.” She stammered “I was hoping to visit MY boyfriend but apparently he had the same idea and went to Inaba.”

“Why does it matter anyway? We can handle this, right?” Yukari said cheerfully, getting her weapon ready

“Yeah!” Ann boomed, her mask forming on her face

“Then let's move out” Naoto ordered “By the way Ann… What's with the red latex bodysuit?”

________________________________________________

The women continued traveling through the Metaverse in their search for Yukiko, until eventually they stumbled onto something strange. A large, spiralling gate of black and white

“That's weird…” Ann said “these are usually black and red. Not black and white. But shadows are normally in here. Maybe Yukiko ended up here”

The other two nodded as they stepped through the portal, arriving in another area of mementos. There before them stood a man. Though, by his eyes, he was no shadow

“Who are you?” Naoto demanded as she drew her gun

“Wow. Such an abrasive way to greet someone.” he teased “You’ve only just seen me and you’re pulling out a gun?”

“Hang on, Naoto. We don’t know if this guy--” Yukari began

“Him simply being here means he has distorted desires, right Ann?” Naoto interjected

“Well actually… this guy isn’t a shadow… How did you get in here?” she asked

“Same way you did, I’d guess.” he shrugged “Now what exactly do you want?”

“We’re looking for someone. A friend of mine” Naoto said, her gun still trained on him

“Okay. Well you’re gonna need to be a bit more specific.”

“We’re looking for a girl named Yukiko” Yukari added

“Ohhhh. You mean Konohana Sakuya?” he asked

“No. That’s her Persona. We want--” Naoto began, before her words caught in her throat.

Yukiko appeared from the shadows. But she didn’t seem herself. She was dressed in a bizarre, pink outfit, her stomach and breasts on full display, and her eyes glowing pink

Naoto immediately pulled back the hammer on her gun

“What the hell did you do to her?!” She exclaimed, her own Persona appearing behind her.

The other girls drew their weapons, their Personas appearing as well

“I didn’t do anything. Isn’t that right, my darling little Persona?” he snickered, as Yukiko stood between the man and her friends

“That’s right, Master” she replied

“M-Master?!” Ann exclaimed

“That’s right. Master. Konohana Sakuya here is my Persona” he said, clearly not actually meaning that, and just playing up the situation

Naoto’s lip trembled in rage, a state neither of the other girls had ever seen her in

“Release her immediately or I will--”

Yukiko raised her hand, doing a little gesture with her fingers. As she did, Naoto ceased speaking, her gun falling to the floor

“Marin Karin” Yukiko stated plainly

“Naoto!” Yukari exclaimed as she rushed over

“N-naoto..?” Naoto asked, confused “No… I am… Sukuna-Hinoka” she droned.

Her clothes began to shift and morph. Her arms and legs were covered by bandage wraps, a large pair of blue wings sprouted from her back, and a yellow necktie hung down from her neck. But otherwise, she was naked.

She stood beside Yukiko and the man

“Sukuna-Hinoka reporting for duty, Master. My mind is thou, and thou art my mind”

Yukari sneered, drawing her bow back and firing an arrow at the man. Yukiko reached up, a fan spreading in her hands and deflecting

“Good girl” the man cooed

Yukari and Ann exchanged a worried glance as Yukiko and Naoto stepped towards them. The two girls started to sprint away, with Yukari constantly shooting arrows backwards, and Ann blasting fireballs behind them

“We- we need to get out of here!” Ann cried

“Just go back to the portal!”

The two approached the black and white portal. But as they got there… it faded. Leaving an empty wall as the only thing that remained.

The two women slammed into the wall, and quickly spun back around, ready to fight.

As soon as she turned, Yukari found Naoto’s hand on her bow. She flicked her wrist and the bow cascaded off into the distance. A terrified look loomed over Yukari’s face as Naoto grabbed her by the chin

“Marin Karin” she whispered

“Y-Yukari! Don’t give in!” Ann exclaimed as Yukiko pinned her against the wall

“Marin Karin” Yukiko said with a giggle.

_______________________________________________________

The man sat in Mementos, looking over a set of documents

“Let’s see… Niijima, Satonaka, Kirijo…” he muttered to himself. He sat the documents down and rubbed his eyes

“Seems like a lot of work… Hopefully they don’t come barging in here too. Though… more er… “Personas” isn’t a bad thing”

He turned around, looking into the hall

“Persona!” he called out

The four women came walking forward. Yukiko and Naoto still in the same attire they had been in, but Yukari and Ann now dressed in new attire

Yukari was wearing what appeared to be golden, winged arm guards, and black straps, but little else. While Ann was dressed in a rather flashy, garish black and red dress which exposed her ample breasts to him

“What is your wish, Master?” they all asked in unison

He smiled at them

“Konohana, I could really go for a nice massage” he said

Yukiko nodded, walking behind him and beginning to rub his shoulders

“And Sukuna, I need someone watching the entrance in case anyone else comes barging in.”

Naoto gave him a quick salute, before marching off

“Let’s see… Isis, how about a nice dance?”

Yukari bowed to him, before standing in the middle of the room, beginning to belly dance in front of him

“And Carmen…” he said, looking her up and down before gesturing her closer. He gave her nipple a pinch

“Mm… how about we put these to use?” he purred

“As you wish, Master” she replied with a seductive tone, as she dropped to her knees between his legs.

He lay his head back into Yukiko’s bust, smiling contentedly

“Who’d have thought Marin Karin could be so powerful?”



Hope you guys liked it!

Until next time!

StepfordCrimson
>> #421702
Posted on 2021-05-27 21:20:40
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Wrong version of <<static.wikia.nocookie.net...own/406?cb=20080816093733|Isis>> man! :P

Mindcollector13
>> #421703
Posted on 2021-05-27 21:21:25
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StepfordCrimson said:
Wrong version of Isis man! :P


I know. :P

Her version doesn't really work with being costumified though.

ivatent
>> #421706
Posted on 2021-05-27 21:49:43
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They all look so good~

GoldenGang-Star
>> #421707
Posted on 2021-05-27 22:23:32
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I love the idea of hypnotized persona users becoming their personas! Id love to see more of these

TalahDarkfang
>> #421717
Posted on 2021-05-28 00:16:37
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GoldenGang-Star said:
I love the idea of hypnotized persona users becoming their personas!


I am thou, thou art I
You'd look really good in my outfit, so your body is mine now

pokemongirl
>> #421740
Posted on 2021-05-28 02:17:01
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Such good outfits~~~

ghost13
>> #421787
Posted on 2021-05-28 07:10:28
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Mindcollector13 said:
Alright! And I’m back with another commission, this time from Shinzu!

And it’s starring my best girls from the three Persona games I’ve uh… sssssort of played. I never actually finished 3. I plan to eventually though.

And yes. I know I have two girls from P4 here. Listen, I find it very hard to decide between Yukino and Naoto. I’ve done two P4 runs and romanced Yukiko the first time, then Naoto the second, and I’m split between them. So they both get to be here.

Also, I’m aware Yukari’s doesn’t actually look like her version of her Persona. But her original doesn’t lend itself to a costume, so I picked the P5 variant.

Anyways, as usual, I have a story to go along with it



The world began to warp and change as reality gave way to the realm known as the Metaverse, where Yukari Takeba, Naoto Shirogane, and Ann Takamaki stepped into Mementos from the Shibuya railway station.

“Huh. You were serious. You come in and out of the shadow world from your phone” Yukari stated, looking down at Ann’s phone, which displayed an application of a Red eyeball.

“Mhm! Naoto, you said you guys went into TV’s right? That’s so much cooler!” Ann replied with a smile.

“It’s true, we did. But the method doesn’t matter right now. I hope you haven’t forgotten that we’re here to search for Yukiko, not to discuss the means by which we access this place.” Naoto said in her usual calm, but firm demeanor

“Right! You know her best, Naoto! Where do we start?” Ann asked

Naoto began looking around, taking in her surroundings

“This Mementos… What is it exactly?”

Ann’s looked down, a bit embarrassed

“Uhm… I don't really understand it all that well, but it has something to do with cognition taking form without a distortion. At least not a big one. If the distortion gets too crazy it makes a Palace or a Jail. But this is for smaller ones” she said

“Hm… I wonder why Yukiko would come here.” Naoto pondered “Apart from which, why didn't you two bring more of your teams?”

Yukari sighed

“Junpei is off being a doofus somewhere, Akihiko and Mitsuru are on vacation, who knows where Ken and Koromaru are, and Aegis and Labrys are… Looking into something.”

“Yeah. Basically the same here. Makoto and Haru are doing study abroad programs for their college stuff, Ryuji moved to the country, Yusuke was doing a world tour to ‘find his muse’ or something, Sumire is in America for a competition, Futaba had her phone taken away so she didn't get distracted for finals, and Akechi is visiting Morgana and our leader back in his hometown…. And he didn't even ask me to come along so I could visit my own boyfriend” Ann grumbled “Besides. Don't you have teammates too?”

Naoto looked a bit red in the face

“Well… I was the only one who knew Yukiko came out here. And I… Was already in the area.” She stammered “I was hoping to visit MY boyfriend but apparently he had the same idea and went to Inaba.”

“Why does it matter anyway? We can handle this, right?” Yukari said cheerfully, getting her weapon ready

“Yeah!” Ann boomed, her mask forming on her face

“Then let's move out” Naoto ordered “By the way Ann… What's with the red latex bodysuit?”

________________________________________________

The women continued traveling through the Metaverse in their search for Yukiko, until eventually they stumbled onto something strange. A large, spiralling gate of black and white

“That's weird…” Ann said “these are usually black and red. Not black and white. But shadows are normally in here. Maybe Yukiko ended up here”

The other two nodded as they stepped through the portal, arriving in another area of mementos. There before them stood a man. Though, by his eyes, he was no shadow

“Who are you?” Naoto demanded as she drew her gun

“Wow. Such an abrasive way to greet someone.” he teased “You’ve only just seen me and you’re pulling out a gun?”

“Hang on, Naoto. We don’t know if this guy--” Yukari began

“Him simply being here means he has distorted desires, right Ann?” Naoto interjected

“Well actually… this guy isn’t a shadow… How did you get in here?” she asked

“Same way you did, I’d guess.” he shrugged “Now what exactly do you want?”

“We’re looking for someone. A friend of mine” Naoto said, her gun still trained on him

“Okay. Well you’re gonna need to be a bit more specific.”

“We’re looking for a girl named Yukiko” Yukari added

“Ohhhh. You mean Konohana Sakuya?” he asked

“No. That’s her Persona. We want--” Naoto began, before her words caught in her throat.

Yukiko appeared from the shadows. But she didn’t seem herself. She was dressed in a bizarre, pink outfit, her stomach and breasts on full display, and her eyes glowing pink

Naoto immediately pulled back the hammer on her gun

“What the hell did you do to her?!” She exclaimed, her own Persona appearing behind her.

The other girls drew their weapons, their Personas appearing as well

“I didn’t do anything. Isn’t that right, my darling little Persona?” he snickered, as Yukiko stood between the man and her friends

“That’s right, Master” she replied

“M-Master?!” Ann exclaimed

“That’s right. Master. Konohana Sakuya here is my Persona” he said, clearly not actually meaning that, and just playing up the situation

Naoto’s lip trembled in rage, a state neither of the other girls had ever seen her in

“Release her immediately or I will--”

Yukiko raised her hand, doing a little gesture with her fingers. As she did, Naoto ceased speaking, her gun falling to the floor

“Marin Karin” Yukiko stated plainly

“Naoto!” Yukari exclaimed as she rushed over

“N-naoto..?” Naoto asked, confused “No… I am… Sukuna-Hinoka” she droned.

Her clothes began to shift and morph. Her arms and legs were covered by bandage wraps, a large pair of blue wings sprouted from her back, and a yellow necktie hung down from her neck. But otherwise, she was naked.

She stood beside Yukiko and the man

“Sukuna-Hinoka reporting for duty, Master. My mind is thou, and thou art my mind”

Yukari sneered, drawing her bow back and firing an arrow at the man. Yukiko reached up, a fan spreading in her hands and deflecting

“Good girl” the man cooed

Yukari and Ann exchanged a worried glance as Yukiko and Naoto stepped towards them. The two girls started to sprint away, with Yukari constantly shooting arrows backwards, and Ann blasting fireballs behind them

“We- we need to get out of here!” Ann cried

“Just go back to the portal!”

The two approached the black and white portal. But as they got there… it faded. Leaving an empty wall as the only thing that remained.

The two women slammed into the wall, and quickly spun back around, ready to fight.

As soon as she turned, Yukari found Naoto’s hand on her bow. She flicked her wrist and the bow cascaded off into the distance. A terrified look loomed over Yukari’s face as Naoto grabbed her by the chin

“Marin Karin” she whispered

“Y-Yukari! Don’t give in!” Ann exclaimed as Yukiko pinned her against the wall

“Marin Karin” Yukiko said with a giggle.

_______________________________________________________

The man sat in Mementos, looking over a set of documents

“Let’s see… Niijima, Satonaka, Kirijo…” he muttered to himself. He sat the documents down and rubbed his eyes

“Seems like a lot of work… Hopefully they don’t come barging in here too. Though… more er… “Personas” isn’t a bad thing”

He turned around, looking into the hall

“Persona!” he called out

The four women came walking forward. Yukiko and Naoto still in the same attire they had been in, but Yukari and Ann now dressed in new attire

Yukari was wearing what appeared to be golden, winged arm guards, and black straps, but little else. While Ann was dressed in a rather flashy, garish black and red dress which exposed her ample breasts to him

“What is your wish, Master?” they all asked in unison

He smiled at them

“Konohana, I could really go for a nice massage” he said

Yukiko nodded, walking behind him and beginning to rub his shoulders

“And Sukuna, I need someone watching the entrance in case anyone else comes barging in.”

Naoto gave him a quick salute, before marching off

“Let’s see… Isis, how about a nice dance?”

Yukari bowed to him, before standing in the middle of the room, beginning to belly dance in front of him

“And Carmen…” he said, looking her up and down before gesturing her closer. He gave her nipple a pinch

“Mm… how about we put these to use?” he purred

“As you wish, Master” she replied with a seductive tone, as she dropped to her knees between his legs.

He lay his head back into Yukiko’s bust, smiling contentedly

“Who’d have thought Marin Karin could be so powerful?”



Hope you guys liked it!

Until next time!



Any chance you might be willing to commission more for the other Persona girls?

Mindcollector13
>> #421849
Posted on 2021-05-28 19:21:01
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ghost13 said:
Any chance you might be willing to commission more for the other Persona girls?


No plans to do so currently, but never say never. I could see myself getting another set.

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