The bright blue glow is kinda distracting when trying to read the text. Maybe just go for a spiral or something next time? I dunno. Aside from that one little nitpick, this is super hot (not just 'cause she's a Fire-Type) and if she couldn't snap me out of my trance, then I wouldn't mind being her hypno pet from then on.
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Aside from that one little nitpick, this is super hot (not just 'cause she's a Fire-Type) and if she couldn't snap me out of my trance, then I wouldn't mind being her hypno pet from then on.
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The bright blue glow is kinda distracting when trying to read the text. Maybe just go for a spiral or something next time? I dunno.
Well, I gave that a shot, since that didn't require that much effort.
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....and it outperformed either variant of the previous one within less than a day. Dang.
Eh, sometimes it happens that stuff with less effort put into it does better. Personally really like your stuff so I hope you keep it up! ^__^