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dreamshade_(manipper) empty_eyes femsub happy_trance pink_hair rhine satori_komeiji short_hair touhou

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Dreamshade
>> #10976
Posted on 2014-02-23 06:43:25
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My first manip; criticism and advice would be greatly appreciated. <3
LillyTank
>> #10977
Posted on 2014-02-23 07:02:27
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Dreamshade said:
My first manip; criticism and advice would be greatly appreciated. <3


It's vague but I like it. Text would probably work well with this one.
(Canon text, preferably. Not that I'm too familiar with the Touhou universe; it's just a peeve of mine.)
I'd offer more specific advice but I'm not sure of how much more you're willing to do here.
Dreamshade
>> #10981
Posted on 2014-02-23 08:36:49
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LillyTank said:
It's vague but I like it. Text would probably work well with this one.
(Canon text, preferably. Not that I'm too familiar with the Touhou universe; it's just a peeve of mine.)
I'd offer more specific advice but I'm not sure of how much more you're willing to do here.

I'm willing to do more, it was just 7 AM and I wasn't feeling up to continuing. I tried a couple lines of text, but I couldn't get them to look right, so I deleted them.

Thanks for the input. :)
HypnoMangaEditor
>> #10986
Posted on 2014-02-23 09:26:58
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LillyTank said:
Text would probably work well with this one.

Definetly. It's a beautiful image, creating a fitting story or hypnosis chant will improve it immensely.
Underscore
>> #10997
Posted on 2014-02-23 11:45:24
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Since the advise for text is allready given I'll just give a small little tip, try and Crop out the black bars, having the image full frame makes it look alot better and nit like its just someone who pressed printscreen while watching :) Still a good one to be Your first, keep it up :)
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