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Cradily
>> #13168
Posted on 2014-03-23 11:17:08
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Tried to have more text. I'm not much of a writer though. Is it good enough, or should I just stick to not much text?
Doors54
>> #13172
Posted on 2014-03-23 13:24:26
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The text is good. So good it makes me want to be a girl so I can live this out myself.
ItSwingsBothWays
>> #13174
Posted on 2014-03-23 14:13:49
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Text is good, albeit with some awkwardly phrased sentences to start with.
scp-682
>> #13175
Posted on 2014-03-23 15:04:42
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Doors54 said:
The text is good. So good it makes me want to be a girl so I can live this out myself.


Why would you want to be the one hypnotized? Even though its pleasurable, as the text says you aren't conscious of it, so you wouldn't remember any of it...tho the being a girl part I agree with...female pleasure > male pleasure

Mister Vi
>> #13178
Posted on 2014-03-23 17:18:50
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scp-682 said:
Why would you want to be the one hypnotized? Even though its pleasurable, as the text says you aren't conscious of it,


That's the sub lyfe for you. Even if you can't even remember the pleasure, you play the role of the hypnotized victim anyway. I'd do it just on the principal of not breaking my honor as a sub just because I might not get any pleasure out of it.
Mistress_Marea
>> #13182
Posted on 2014-03-23 19:17:10
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Love this. The writing is very good if a bit akward in the first few lines but then it gets goin and the story is really nice and matches the picture well and is very "exciting"
TheGoodShank
>> #13206
Posted on 2014-03-24 00:41:07
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Yes, yes, this is really good. Though for some reason I suddenly feel like hitting a fax machine with a baseball bat.
Mister Vi
>> #13216
Posted on 2014-03-24 02:54:20
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Digitaldive18 said:
Yes, yes, this is really good. Though for some reason I suddenly feel like hitting a fax machine with a baseball bat.


I wouldn't recommend it you can get kicked out of the office for stuff like that... >.>
LoneOval
>> #13228
Posted on 2014-03-24 05:04:09
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Digitaldive18 said:
Yes, yes, this is really good. Though for some reason I suddenly feel like hitting a fax machine with a baseball bat.


I'm surprised no one has ever done anything relevant to our interests with Office Space - probably the most culturally influential movie of all time with hypnosis as a critical plot point.
Zko
>> #13235
Posted on 2014-03-24 06:00:51
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would this count as office_lady tag?
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