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devilsubconscious
>> #452892
Posted on 2022-01-08 04:53:32
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Thanks for the continued feedback guys. Here's a short list of some of the suggestions from you guys that I'll definitely be making soon:

A continuation of this story with at least the wizard and a cleric of some sort
Some stuff with maid(s)
Tech control
Aware sub who still wants to be hypnotized (I love this idea and I'm surprised I haven't done it sooner)

I'm not really sure how I want to continue my other series "A new spell". If you have any requests for what you want to see in that story, or requests in general, keep it coming. I'm here to give back to this community :p
Lewd-queen
>> #452946
Posted on 2022-01-08 08:26:12
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Some who makes stories, listens to feed back and does an amazing job!?!

I pray you stay with us for many years
abithig
>> #452973
Posted on 2022-01-08 12:38:48
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I must say, your work is very quickly becoming something I'm looking forward to every time I visit the site. These are really good! Only thing I really have to say, be sure not to burn yourself out! If this is a comfortable workflow for you, by all means continue! But if it's not, I'd rather have slightly less frequent posts than see you burnout and see none afterwards. Either way, take care of yourself first and foremost. <3
sleeperhit
>> #453006
Posted on 2022-01-08 14:58:50
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Oh yeah this series is great. Maybe for the future, a girl gets to fill the archetype of "so aroused to be a guard she's basically ripping apart everything her Master throws her at to shreds and that gets her even further in heat"?
JustAHypnoArtist
>> #453013
Posted on 2022-01-08 17:10:26
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abithig said:
I must say, your work is very quickly becoming something I'm looking forward to every time I visit the site. These are really good! Only thing I really have to say, be sure not to burn yourself out! If this is a comfortable workflow for you, by all means continue! But if it's not, I'd rather have slightly less frequent posts than see you burnout and see none afterwards. Either way, take care of yourself first and foremost. <3


Yeah I second everything this person said ten fold. Keep up the great work!
c120run
>> #453117
Posted on 2022-01-09 06:50:24
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devilsubconscious said:
Thanks for the continued feedback guys. Here's a short list of some of the suggestions from you guys that I'll definitely be making soon:

A continuation of this story with at least the wizard and a cleric of some sort
Some stuff with maid(s)
Tech control
Aware sub who still wants to be hypnotized (I love this idea and I'm surprised I haven't done it sooner)

I'm not really sure how I want to continue my other series "A new spell". If you have any requests for what you want to see in that story, or requests in general, keep it coming. I'm here to give back to this community :p



:)
your work is consistently great, cant wait to see what you post in the future!
reepost
>> #453134
Posted on 2022-01-09 08:08:39
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Minor suggestion: If possible, could you consider running the text through a spell checker before posting? It's fast and greatly improves the quality of the post.
april
>> #454861
Posted on 2022-01-20 03:39:32
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I quite nearly died of panic when I realized the gem was gone. After a very enjoyable evening with my new mercenary friend, Thad nearly walked all the way back to my room in town before I noticed it missing from my pocket. I ran back through the town retracing my steps. I had nearly come to terms with the loss, after all I already had two lovely women in my harem who weren't going anywhere. But then I found it. I was so excited I had to stop myself from staring at it too closely as I got near, but the thief I found it with wasn't so lucky. A simply dressed vixen was on her knees in an alley near the mercenary offices, the gem rested in her limp arm and her eyes were locked to it.

Are there even any thoughts left in your head? You've had at least 20 minutes alone with that thing.
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I've never actually tested what happens with prolonged exposure, or what happens when the subject is left to trance unguided... Hey! Say something, anything!

Hehe... pop, pop, pop wooooo

I'm not surprised... if anything I'm a little surprised you still understand me at all. Alright, I'm going to help you fill your head back up.

Awwww…

Don't groan at me you lousy thief. From now on you will trust me completely, all of my words must be true. Listening to me is totally natural to you, in fact, it brings you pleasure.

Your words... fill my empty head... my thoughts go pop hehe.

My words are your truth, you are devoted to me. You would never steal from me or harm me or my friends unless I order you to.

You... you are my truth... I... d-devoted..?

Devoted means that you love me completely, can't live without me and would do anything for me, anything to make me happy. Now I'll be taking that back please.

Yaawwwnn. Hey mister? Can you tell me where I am right now? And can I stay with you please mister? I need you please...
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