A bit more comedic this one and a little bit of world building. Not the ending I’m sure you were expecting, but it’s one I was satisfied with. Also the man was named Mr. brick by a friend. This is the only time you’ll see him but just wanted to give them a name.
so the next time will be the final for take your child to work (unless it becomes 4 pages writers block sucks) until then will not see this company outside 2 things. my milestone comics or a small sort of reference guide to the looks and ranks of the company.
till then thanks for enjoying my stuff remember employment is inevitable
One thing I think would actually be nice to see is a character that can kinda stand up to the company and not just get brainwashed instantly. I had an OC idea for a different story that could work here: a hacker who captures and reprogram greybots (or in this case the fembots) to be their sex slaves. They're smart and careful enough to figure out how to avoid being caught but also part of their character is they deep down are enticed by the danger that if they make a mistake they'll be droned.
SuperTechno324 said: I didn't even notice that one of them was the journalist from earlier, until I looked at the character tag :p
ya this comic was a self contained story on a different world then we have seen in the past. wanted to focuses a bit more on the actual brainwashing. how it works and what the actual effects are, like how much of them really survive. what changed and whos actually brainwashed at this company and whos willingly helping it happen.
teso said: One thing I think would actually be nice to see is a character that can kinda stand up to the company and not just get brainwashed instantly. I had an OC idea for a different story that could work here: a hacker who captures and reprogram greybots (or in this case the fembots) to be their sex slaves. They're smart and careful enough to figure out how to avoid being caught but also part of their character is they deep down are enticed by the danger that if they make a mistake they'll be droned.
well i never plan on doing sex or greybots that's just not the direction i want to go.
well as far as the graybot thing, that's why I said "in this case" as in I'd just replace the graybots w/ the fembots to make the idea work in your universe. As for using them for sex, that was me thinking 'well why else would they get involved w/ them, might as well give them a robo-fetish'. Or I did have that one idea of a guy wanting to free the girls who got brainwashed, though deep down he does find them being fembots hot. The gist being having a character who'd interact w/ the fembots and antagonize the company but avoid being converted (or at least not for a while, or me maybe they actually succeed in freeing some girls from the company, or maybe they give into their desires and go big and take over the entire company and now all the fembots serve them alone...actually this could be a fun cyoa idea).
teso said: well as far as the graybot thing, that's why I said "in this case" as in I'd just replace the graybots w/ the fembots to make the idea work in your universe. As for using them for sex, that was me thinking 'well why else would they get involved w/ them, might as well give them a robo-fetish'. Or I did have that one idea of a guy wanting to free the girls who got brainwashed, though deep down he does find them being fembots hot. The gist being having a character who'd interact w/ the fembots and antagonize the company but avoid being converted (or at least not for a while, or me maybe they actually succeed in freeing some girls from the company, or maybe they give into their desires and go big and take over the entire company and now all the fembots serve them alone...actually this could be a fun cyoa idea).
given how little ive shown or reviled about the company and the grate setting as a whole. you might want to hold off on jumping to conclusions.
shinylamp said: given how little ive shown or reviled about the company and the grate setting as a whole. you might want to hold off on jumping to conclusions.
I'm not jumping to conclusions or speculating on anything. Just shared an idea for a character/story that I'd been sitting on for a while and saw only needed minor changes to work within this cyberverse. Basically a fanfic premise
teso said: I'm not jumping to conclusions or speculating on anything. Just shared an idea for a character/story that I'd been sitting on for a while and saw only needed minor changes to work within this cyberverse. Basically a fanfic premise
I feel like this story/setting is 'disturbing' enough without the usual kinky shenanigans seen on here, as much as I'd like to see that myself.
teso said: I'm not jumping to conclusions or speculating on anything. Just shared an idea for a character/story that I'd been sitting on for a while and saw only needed minor changes to work within this cyberverse. Basically a fanfic premise
as long as you state its none cannon thats fine.
SuperTechno324 said: I feel like this story/setting is 'disturbing' enough without the usual kinky shenanigans seen on here, as much as I'd like to see that myself.
id like to do story's that have no mc that are more focused on the characters. I also know those aren't as popular, take your child to work day being an example of that. still if you want to learn world building that's were you'll find it. i hope to have the next page written up by next month
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Also the man was named Mr. brick by a friend. This is the only time you’ll see him but just wanted to give them a name.
so the next time will be the final for take your child to work (unless it becomes 4 pages writers block sucks) until then will not see this company outside 2 things. my milestone comics or a small sort of reference guide to the looks and ranks of the company.
till then thanks for enjoying my stuff remember employment is inevitable
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I didn't even notice that one of them was the journalist from earlier, until I looked at the character tag :p
ya this comic was a self contained story on a different world then we have seen in the past. wanted to focuses a bit more on the actual brainwashing. how it works and what the actual effects are, like how much of them really survive. what changed and whos actually brainwashed at this company and whos willingly helping it happen.
One thing I think would actually be nice to see is a character that can kinda stand up to the company and not just get brainwashed instantly. I had an OC idea for a different story that could work here: a hacker who captures and reprogram greybots (or in this case the fembots) to be their sex slaves. They're smart and careful enough to figure out how to avoid being caught but also part of their character is they deep down are enticed by the danger that if they make a mistake they'll be droned.
well i never plan on doing sex or greybots that's just not the direction i want to go.
though theres one exception. old post and early uniform look as well as old company logo hypnohub.net/post/show/89...it-breasts-empty_eyes-ene
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well i never plan on doing sex or greybots that's just not the direction i want to go.
though theres one exception. old post and early uniform look as well as old company logo hypnohub.net/post/show/89...it-breasts-empty_eyes-ene
well as far as the graybot thing, that's why I said "in this case" as in I'd just replace the graybots w/ the fembots to make the idea work in your universe. As for using them for sex, that was me thinking 'well why else would they get involved w/ them, might as well give them a robo-fetish'. Or I did have that one idea of a guy wanting to free the girls who got brainwashed, though deep down he does find them being fembots hot. The gist being having a character who'd interact w/ the fembots and antagonize the company but avoid being converted (or at least not for a while, or me maybe they actually succeed in freeing some girls from the company, or maybe they give into their desires and go big and take over the entire company and now all the fembots serve them alone...actually this could be a fun cyoa idea).
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well as far as the graybot thing, that's why I said "in this case" as in I'd just replace the graybots w/ the fembots to make the idea work in your universe. As for using them for sex, that was me thinking 'well why else would they get involved w/ them, might as well give them a robo-fetish'. Or I did have that one idea of a guy wanting to free the girls who got brainwashed, though deep down he does find them being fembots hot. The gist being having a character who'd interact w/ the fembots and antagonize the company but avoid being converted (or at least not for a while, or me maybe they actually succeed in freeing some girls from the company, or maybe they give into their desires and go big and take over the entire company and now all the fembots serve them alone...actually this could be a fun cyoa idea).
given how little ive shown or reviled about the company and the grate setting as a whole. you might want to hold off on jumping to conclusions.
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given how little ive shown or reviled about the company and the grate setting as a whole. you might want to hold off on jumping to conclusions.
I'm not jumping to conclusions or speculating on anything. Just shared an idea for a character/story that I'd been sitting on for a while and saw only needed minor changes to work within this cyberverse. Basically a fanfic premise
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I'm not jumping to conclusions or speculating on anything. Just shared an idea for a character/story that I'd been sitting on for a while and saw only needed minor changes to work within this cyberverse. Basically a fanfic premise
I feel like this story/setting is 'disturbing' enough without the usual kinky shenanigans seen on here, as much as I'd like to see that myself.
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I'm not jumping to conclusions or speculating on anything. Just shared an idea for a character/story that I'd been sitting on for a while and saw only needed minor changes to work within this cyberverse. Basically a fanfic premise
as long as you state its none cannon thats fine.
I feel like this story/setting is 'disturbing' enough without the usual kinky shenanigans seen on here, as much as I'd like to see that myself.
id like to do story's that have no mc that are more focused on the characters. I also know those aren't as popular, take your child to work day being an example of that. still if you want to learn world building that's were you'll find it. i hope to have the next page written up by next month